Hey guys this is my profile which has been getting medium responses. Any advice is much appreciated. Thanks

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=66472275

I seriously need help with this guys :/

I'd ditch the player-style picture with a girl on each arm. Reeks of showing off. Try a clear, color picture where you're doing something fun, smiling, laughing, etc. instead and where you think you look good.

Don't know? Get a girl to pick out a picture for you.

Your employment situation being complicated smells like unemployment.

Your profile isn't especially engaging or witty. Either tell them how great you are in huge grand fashion, or go hardcore with self-deprecation in a playful, fun way.

Trying to be constructive - not insulting. Please take it for what it is.

No worries, I took what you said as constructive criticism as intended I decided to simplify my profile a bit and paint a picture of who I am. Admittedly its not the best profile ever but I couldn't think of anything humorous like you suggested but I'd like your feedback anyway. The first date line just came off the top of my head so I'm not too sure about it yet but it seemed unexpected and cheeky so I thought I'd give it a try so tell me what you think. "Wait back at my place" isn't what it sounds like btw haha http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=66472275

No worries, I took what you said as constructive criticism as intended I decided to simplify my profile a bit and paint a picture of who I am. Admittedly its not the best profile ever but I couldn't think of anything humorous like you suggested but I'd like your feedback anyway. The first date line just came off the top of my head so I'm not too sure about it yet but it seemed unexpected and cheeky so I thought I'd give it a try so tell me what you think. "Wait back at my place" isn't what it sounds like btw haha http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=66472275