Allright guy...I need some critique... Please dont cover it with honey, I can take it.. I took some bits from this site too... Thanks for that..

I go my own path and always follow my intuition. Going to the gym is important, four times a week. You might know me as the guy from those underwear commercials.

My pizza's are the best in the world, so I am always prepared to do a cook-off. I don't mind a bit of competition, so if you can't cook, forget about it...

On my 24th I went on an early retirement. Did everything I ever dreamed of doing and seven years later i knew one thing for sure. The sentence "I wish I did...." will never leave my mouth.

The Secret works!! Absolutely!

After my long jouney I started studying again, besides my great job and now I am almost finished. I am very ambitious on different levels.

At the current moment I am busy designing a new type of rainbow, am about to find cures for different illnesses, work on my zeropoint flux capacitor for unlimited energy is almost done, and relax and enjoy the sun a lot.
Unfortunately time is precious, so lately I can only find myself to do the latter.

Please only respond if you're a rat, pig or monkey...or you're not into Chinese horocopes. Pff, good. Me neither. As long as you still have half your teeth.

You're someone who likes to say the following sentences:
"I love that"
"Sure, why not"
"Yeah, I wanted to say that, I just was afraid to ask"
And if you're into Paris or Rome... already pick out your ring...

Ok, now stop flirting and send me a message.

Ok, stop nou maar met flirten en stuur een berichtje...

which website is that for?

It's Dutch, so I translated it first. It's not a badoo like.. It's called relatieplanet.nl

oh okay. I think it is a good description. But you know... Shorter is best. Visit profiles of other guys in your area and see what they write. Try to stand out from them. That's it.

It is too try hard! Although I know it is a PUA profile...I see right through it, and if I can, I assure you that the girls can (especially HB7+). Stop trying to sell "you" and start selling "possibilities".

The best line in your profile is "The secret works, Absolutely!" as it leaves mystery (what secret?) for those who have not read it, and a conversation starter for those who have read it.


Some notes on profile creation:
Instead of saying stuff like "I like all types of music" say something ABOUT music or how it makes you feel:

"My perspective on music is that it’s pure, emotional communication. Have you ever listened to a song in another language but still understood on an emotional level, what the song was trying to express? Music can bring emotions out in us and bring us back to things we've felt in the past…Think about a favorite song from years ago, how it makes you feel when you say “Man, I haven’t heard this song in forever”. (I know you’re smiling right now)"

Sell the idea of you:

"Recently a good friend paid me this complement: “You navigate seamlessly between fun and serious, sensual and sexual, romantic and raunchy”. That quote can help you get a grasp of what I’m like from my friend’s perspective. Hopefully the “raunchy” part is more about my sense of humor! LOL"

Be fun/funny: (Don't say "I like to have fun", express that in your thoughts and words)

"You're probably not gonna believe this, but I party like it's 1999!" This is a good lead in for when you get the date, you can find the song "Party like it's 1999" and play it when she gets in the car, or have the DJ play it at the club. Then you have recall humor, drag her onto the dancefloor or make her laugh when you say "This is gonna be OUR song!"

Hopefully this helps you better understand that Being who you are is better than Telling someone who you are.


Peace...

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All girl's are Freaks...It is your job to bring it out in them! - Crypto

You need to stop bending over and letting her ass fuck your brain! - Heywood

Thanks a lot... I changes it a bit... The next part I was planning to put in there as it was some fun game i played with my ex. Not sure if it would come off as creepy...

I have been told that I am very good with reading your feelings and acting at the right moment. I used to play this game with a girlfriend abroad. Sometimes I was Clark Kent, when she was sad, sometimes I was Superman at parties and just for fun, and sometimes Bizarro (for those of you who don't know...Bizarro is the evil twin brother of Superman).
The last one had to show up quite often...and you girls now why. It's THAT feeling, right?