Just looking for some feedback on my POF profile.

LINK: http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=36584937

I keep changing things around and I cant find a real solid approach. So input please.

To me it seems that you are trying to hard, too much extraneous information.

Anyone got anything else to add?

In the spirit of constructive criticism, perhaps a few pictures of you having fun with friends and enjoying yourself. Convey that you have a fun lifestyle.

You need to be way way way more fun. What you have there is borderline guy humour, it's just weird to a girl.

You need stuff like you favourite shows/movies/ foods etc...

if you like nando's then put :

"NANDO'S IS A GIFT FROM THE GODS. HONESTLY, IF YOU DON'T AGREE WITH ME ON THAT THEN I DON'T THINK WE'LL GET ALONG AND I WILL HAVE TO END YOU!! Tell me, how are your pillow fighting skills?"

Stupid/funny/witty and although you're thinking 'wtf man!' this is actually golden, tested and all. So there you go, first piece of my profile given out to others. Enjoy.

Anyone got anything else to add?

Changed some of my profile around, still working on it. Anymore suggestions?

Hey Sktlez,

Just a general comment, it's much better to say what you DO want rather than what you don't want. When guys do that it just sounds like they are listing all the flaws/baggage of their ex that they want to avoid this time around. Sounding bitter, scarred and jaded IS NOT ATTRACTIVE!

Also, I'd take down the head shot and just have the guitar shot and the green t shirt shot. They are the best of the 3.

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