Hey, long time lurker, first time poster here. I've been trying the online game for a couple months and just had no luck at all. Only a couple of girls have responded to my messages. I've structured them very close to the stuff on here, just changed to my own style. I'm wondering if my profile just sucks.
Would love for one you that has had success to just take a quick look and tell me if you see something that jumps out as a red flag!

It won't let me post the link to my POF profile, but I'll post the contents here, my profile id is 53449559 if someone could take a peek at my pictures. Again thanks for any advice.

I lose track of time when I'm at work because I enjoy what I do so much. I'm totally passionate about my career. I live with my best friend, my dog and I spoil him rotten. American Idol? Don't ask my opinion because I've never seen a single episode. I can't tell you what TV shows are on because I never watch the thing. I spend my time playing my drums, sculpting, playing my guitar, working out at the gym or working on my house and goofing off with my dog.

I’m looking for a smart girl ready to face the zombie apocalypse with me as my partner in crime. A great sense of humor as well as falling in love with my dog are mandatory!

I make a huge effort to keep myself in shape and expect my lady to be in good shape too. I know it sounds shallow but looks do matter.

Don't message me if:

* You're a stripper.
* Have more tattoos than I do.
* You take 20 minutes to get through airport security because of your piercings.
* You can't tell me the difference between a noun and a verb.
* You have implants, I'm not into big and fake.

Wow, no one has an opinion one way or the other? LOL!

Hey - from a woman's POV I think you have a pretty good profile overall. I really like the stuff about your dog, which is always an attractive quality in a guy.

One tip I would give is rather than list what you DONT want, list what you do want. When you put things in the negative it makes you sound picky and bitter and critical. When you put things in the positive (ie things you love in a woman) it makes you sound fun and confident that you'll find THAT girl.

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Best of luck!

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I think the profile is good, not seen the pictures but the text funny, agree about keeping your qualifications positive rather than negative.

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I have that down as my "would like to meet"