What's up! Thanks for stopping by my little corner of cyberspace. I'm Nathan, 19 years old, and I'm taking classes at AVC to get my Business Degree. I grew up doing sports so I'm up for anything outdoors. I enjoy making videos, having fun, and living in the moment. I like a girl who is down to earth, very ambitious and artistic. She is kind and considerate and would like to be her naturally caring self with people who have earned her trust. Loves to do random stuff, and likes to adventure. I like to keep things short so If you want to chat feel free. Worst case-scenario we might become friends, best of luck with your search

Scale of 1 to 10?

just my 2 cents

It's generic. Nothing interesting there.

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Its not bad or anything but doesn't stand out a lot.

Just add more about you and keep it light and fun. Right now there's nothing to really grab attention or make you stand out. I always add like a 5 point list of fun things I like, it's not heavy reading and gets to the point.

I think adding the part about what you want in a girl is good but don't make it the main focus of your profile.
Since this is your profile, you won't have really spoken to the girl yet so you don't want this section to be like "qualifying" a girl. Mainly because if she sees something that's "not her" it automatically disqualifies her from replying/messaging you.

Instead write it kinda like a horoscope... you know how those are worded... in such a way that its all pretty generic but makes everyone read it and say "Hey! That's so me!"