Looking for some feedback on this:

"I love to travel and experience other cultures, for example I spent a year living in Australia, and another year traveling the world. During this time I saw all 7 continents (yes including Antarctica!) I've been on the Great Wall of China, stood in front of the Taj Mahal, snorkeled the Great Barrier Reef, and rode a camel in front of the Pyramids in Egypt.

I like to spend my time outdoors when I can, whether that's walking in a park, hiking on a trail, or just sitting outside enjoying good music and good conversation.

I also really enjoy high energy, adrenaline pumping type activities. I have been skydiving, scuba diving with sharks, bungee jumping, whitewater rafting, took a microlight over Victoria Falls, and I flew in a WWI era Tiger Moth in an aerobatics experience.

I'm looking for a girl who is curious about life, enjoys new experiences, generally adventurous. Intelligence is very important to me. I want a girl who has opinions, and is willing to voice them in conversation, someone who can challenge me and make me think. If you've made it this far and think you're that type of girl go ahead and send me an e-mail and let's get to know each other!"

Your first paragraph should be comedic. Say something sbout how you like to rob trains or how you like to sit on the couch with your hand in your pants like Al Bundy! The rest of what you got is pretty solid. Women definetely seem to like guys who have seen the world.