| Nice to see another member representing Vancouver, big ups homie lol
Anyway, your profile...
When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours.
Sounds arrogant, not cocky funny. Lose this. If it's something borderline arrogant, it should at least be funny.
I once climbed Mt.Everest carrying only the gear of my Sherpa.Im always interested in trying new things. I
Love to Bungee jump but only when its without the cord. I once had an awkward moment just so that I could see how it felt. I can make a mean 3 course meal with only a microwave, bathroom sink and spatula. If everyone closes there eyes I can make myself invisible.. My idea of a plan is "To just see how it goes" I'm a world class cuddler and I hold 3 Olympic gold medals in back massages(singles, partners & triples)
Not bad, conveys a sense of humor and adventure at least.
I went traveling to Europe this summer and I'm totally hooked. I'm a fun loving guy who doesn't take much seriously I love to try new things have adventures and step out of my comfort zone. I love cooking and eating out at a new restaurant as long as its not something like Boston Pizza. If your interested in grabbing a coffee give me a shout, I'm sure you'll be glad you did
Talk (in brief) about your trip; what was the highlight, what made it interesting...give the girl a segway into starting a convo. Mention you had the most amazing meal in Paris, wine in Italy blah blah blah it'll make you sound a bit more worldly and interesting. Again, not too much detail but just enough to spark a convo - think of something u may want to see in a person's profile about Europe that may intrigue you to ask them about it.
You need to talk about what you're not looking for as well; that you have standards and have confidence enough to know what it is you're looking for, but also what you aren't looking for. Don't make it an extensive list as you'll look like a unrealistically hard-to-please little prick (not attractive to women).[/b]
Be aware that "Does not want any children" will grossly limit your selection of women. Most women, especially young ones want kids at some point, or at least open to the idea. Not wanting children will single you out to mainly the girls who already have had children, and much older women, or vain types who are too hungup on having a kid because of what it may do to her body. If you really don't want kids, ever, then that's your thing. But if this isn't set in stone for you, I suggest putting undecided.
A few more things:
-do you want to limit yourself to girls with pictures? Some hotties may not have gotten to uploading theirs yet, does it really hurt to fire a meg to them asking for a pic if they've taken the initiative in contacting you first? Point is, u never know what's on the other end.
-remove the pic of you eating the tortilla, just looks kinda odd like your sniffing it for some strange reason
-i'm wondering if you should use the group photo as your main profile pic as it infers preselection and will prompt women to click on your profile (btw it looks like the chick to the left was grabbing the guy's junk, for a moment)
-I'd find a better headline. headlines r pretty important find one conveying wit and charm. Google for some good headlines or perhaps u may find a few on this board.
-include your interests in the interests section, a lot of them cause sometimes girls search for guys based on their interests, or at least they can look at your list and go "hmm I like that too!"
-i think u should tease your adventure side out some more, make u sound a bit more spontaneous I'm sure you've got a tonne to work with particularly cause you're well traveled. Go with this angle, again leave a bit of mystery and intrigue and u do this by not going into explicity detail. Short humorous anecdotes about some thing that happened during your trip should work very well.
Overall I like what you've got it just needs some tweaking a bit more content, but not too much.
Lastly, although you'll get msg'd by girls, it'll likely be from ones you arent attracted to lol (dont take it personally it's just how it is the hot ones normally just lay back while their msg boxes get inundated by horned out losers). If you're going for HB8s, 9s, and 10s on pof it will require some effort on your part to generate interest and keep things moving along to the point of number closing and an actual date. Don't take things personally if she's not hitting u up as quickly as u r to her, girls get so many messages and often yours will get lost under a dozen or so more so give her a chance to respond and never ever act bitchy if she hasn't responded right away, sometimes u'll hear from them the following day.
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