I found this profile on another but the only comments I get about the profile are from fat girls saying "That's funny!" "You're so funny!" "I loled reading your profile" Etc, but they're fat and just trying to get my attention.

So I need your advice on the profile: http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=2043620

52 Views - Anyone?

Ok... a couple of suggestions:

1. you need to get some better pics... the ones you have make you look like a bit of a loner... maybe some with friends, at parties, in some girls company, and doing some exciting activities.
2. Don't tell the girls you're awesome ; show them. Instead of saying "Let me tell you about some of the things that make me awesome...", say "People ask me what I like to do for fun". The rest is good and original.
3. Fill in the first date profile with something a little more concrete. Here's what I have on mine:
"I don't have sex on the first date, but if we're not actually dating, then it might be OK. I'm not for beginners, and if you are a beginner, I recommend gaining some entry-level experience with my friend Alex, who could use a date (!). I don't have time for petty drama and emotional hysterics. I do what I want, when I want ; but I'm more of a giver than a taker. I like simple men, and complicated women.

You should definitely message me if:
You have something interesting to say or discuss ; you are a genuinely good person ; or you are gorgeous. Ideally, you'd exhibit a combination of the three "
4. change your profession to something a bit more whimsical (seal trainer/lap dancer...etc)... same with your interests

Just my 2 cents... Hope this helps.