guys help me out here ! advice things that are good things that are not ! i'm 43 and just trying to get game together including my space and on line !
be brutal if you have to come up with ideas to help me out here !

http://www.myspace.com/bournemouthalpha

I'll be happy to start. First of all, I like the way your profile looks, and how it captured my attention.

Positives:
+Main Picture, is you and two women, showing pre-selection (DHV)
+Your background is fun and exciting! Got to love the Vegas Script.
+The information you listed about yourself is good
+Your pictures that you have are fun, and again show more pre-selection.
+Being a country music fan I like the song on your profile.
+Your top friends are all attractive women!
+Same with the comments on your profile, most are attractive women.

Negatives:
-Your "About Me" Section is like a book, and it need to be shortened.
-You could do some writing in your blog to further convey your personality, any topic that's close to you will work.

Overall, I think you've done excellent work!

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if you have ideas what bits to shorten then pass the info on