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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06, 2015 11:24 pm 
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Hey... Check out my online profile for POF.

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47065087

What do you think? I am not getting any messages returned and I'm wondering if there are anything that I need to work on? Advice will be greatly appreciated.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:51 pm 
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The picture you have titled Bangkok is great, it looks like you are the center of the group and it looks as though the woman's attention is directed towards you.

For the rest of the profile, it looks like you are qualifying yourself for any woman that stops by. Examples of this are:
"Hi. Glad you stopped by."
"I’m looking for a great relationship. Here are some things about me to help you decide if we’d click..."
"My education. Have a BEng (Hons) and MSc. I actually use my education every day and still learning the lessons of life and love. Care to compare notes?"
"You could tell me how your day went and I would listen attentively."

It's going to be beneficial for you to change the way you think about this. Instead of you winning her over, she is winning you over.

Examples of this would be:
"There are certain things I look for in a women and I know what I want."
"I will see if we click."
"Hopefully you are smart enough to keep up with me."
"I would talk too much about myself, of which you wouldn't mind being totally captivated by my words."

She wants strength demonstrated in your profile. To further help you with online game it's going to help you to do two things:
1. Do a search for all the guy's profiles in your area. Likely they are just like yours. Check them out and see how you can make your's stand out.
2. Really read a profile of a woman's. Most will clearly dictate to you a similar frame that you will need to come from. They won't say, "I hope you like me and I hope you decide we click." Instead they will say, "I am not looking for a hook up or one night stand." or similarly "I am looking for someone who is goal-oriented and actually doing something with their life."

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 7:38 pm 
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The picture you have titled Bangkok is great, it looks like you are the center of the group and it looks as though the woman's attention is directed towards you.
but you say pics aren't important , so why should he need to change them?

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 7:49 pm 
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The picture you have titled Bangkok is great, it looks like you are the center of the group and it looks as though the woman's attention is directed towards you.
Lmfao. Is it fuck. For all anybody knows that could be his mother. Even if it isn't, she's hardly a stunner now is she.

The only pics worth keeping are the first and last one. The rest need to get gone.

OP, I don't know why you're on this forum to be honest, it's a pick up and seduction forum, not find a women to marry forum.


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:03 pm 
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Lmfao. Is it fuck. For all anybody knows that could be his mother. Even if it isn't, she's hardly a stunner now is she.
Lol I didn't say it's an amazing picture, but the best part of his profile.
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OP, I don't know why you're on this forum to be honest, it's a pick up and seduction forum, not find a women to marry forum.
This poster acts like one has to be different from the other. Glad your reaching out to get better results.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:38 pm 
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No no no... I think the ending line of "Then let’s go for a long walk to work off those calories!" is the best part.


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:42 pm 
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Lmfao. Is it fuck. For all anybody knows that could be his mother. Even if it isn't, she's hardly a stunner now is she.
Lol I didn't say it's an amazing picture, but the best part of his profile.
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OP, I don't know why you're on this forum to be honest, it's a pick up and seduction forum, not find a women to marry forum.
This poster acts like one has to be different from the other. Glad your reaching out to get better results.

Okay, get the op to give you his password for his POF account, change his pics to however you please (of him"

Use your elite text game. Let's see what you got because to me, his profile is really weak and you are wasting his time by giving this BS unrealistic advice

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 10, 2015 9:35 am 
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way too much information

i leave mine blank (or close to it)!

anything else is qualifying too much and validating - make it seem like you arent that invested in finding someone online - no one really wants to say "oh we met on pof" they want a more real experience (even though it happens and its perfectly find)

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