http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=47076816
There's My profile
I haven't really been gaming much the past few months as I've been extremely busy, but I've got a lot more time on my hands, and tweeting jokes just isn't filling the void.
Let me know what you think I could change. Also, I can never think of a fucking headline! Right now it's just an inside joke that no one will get.

Any tips are appreciated.
Thanks
WC

I think it's fine, me personally I wrote my profile in two or three minutes, it got quite a few replies and is borderline weirdo in some situations, but I found jut being genuine works the best for me. I don't do online very much anymore, because now I actually have time to go out and meet women. So my only advice is dont get hooked to just online, go talk to some random women in public. I think your first initial message is jut as important than your profile, but I tried just writing something different and genuine, usually worked, just don't take online rejection personal, I went in with no expectations and met some really cool women. Here's my profile http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=23520888 any feedback on it, feel free.

Wesley- Your profile is pretty boring. The pics could be better too. Looks try hard with the whole preselection thing (pic of girls)

Perhaps sound more challenging and desirable. Perhaps list some qualities what you like in a woman to make her prove herself to you...I don't think your profile is to it's potential.

Midnyte- pics are confusing since there aren't any ones of yourself alone. But I like your profile and sense of humour, rock on.

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I don't like it. It is too childish. Also try to make it more catchy. Starting with, "Hi, I'm Wes, I'm 22, blah blah blah" is the same thing as starting with "Hi, I'm boring, just like everyone else here". Childish jokes aren't that great I don't think to get women. Women like romance and "alpha" funny, not childish immature humor.

Make our profile more badass and think of a catchy way to present yourself, not the same old boring shit of "Hi, I'm so and so and I like so and so blah blah blah" .. many women will just glance at your profile, so you need to catch their attention with them barely having to read anything.

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