Can I lose anything from my about me section??



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PostPosted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:28 am 
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G'day lads,

It's so obvious that free dating sites like POF are looks first rather than quality of the text. I want to make my about me section smaller because it's useless having an essay but I don't want it to be one paragraph (although I should test that one day). Is there anything you guys think is useless and maybe a DLV??

ABOUT ME
I'm a musician in a few various ways but nothing too serious, you won't see me on The Voice or anything like that but probably at karaoke or jamming on the lounge.

I'm looking for someone who breaks the mould, someone who knows that they're unique, it's amazing how many cut & paste profiles there are on here, I'm interested in getting to know people beyond the profile.

New experiences are a must and I love being taken away to another world by getting immersed in something to watch or do.

Travelling always makes me happy, it helps me apprciate home as well, I'm love living out of a suitcase or replacing things when that suitcase gets too full.

Don't take my word for it, try before you buy, I'm up for the challenge. I'm a smart guy with a lot of hidden talents and the ability to surprise.

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I think it's pretty good but I'm getting pissed at how many "Unread deleted" messages or "read" but no response messages in my sent messages folder.

For the record I don't message the boring "I'm bubbly and easy going" "I want a nice guy" cliche girls, they don't deserve such easy attention for being boring. Agree??


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 11:30 am 
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It's better than most people's profiles. But still needs work I think.

Few spelling mistakes too.

Go to fiverr.com and get a copywriter to write you something spectacular if you don't have a good way with words.

Pics are so important too

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 12:51 pm 
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This profile is still pretty much like every other profile. Think outside the box. And jeez, don't go get someone to write something for you/copy edit. A great profile is NOT about copy-editing and being very eloquent.

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