I'm not gonna message you just because you look cute or like long walks on the beach. It's something I see everyday. I want to know what you have going for you besides your looks. A great sense of sense of self, good energy and a sense of humour is a good start. I don't like playing games and I'm straight to the point. I like a woman who isn't afraid to tell it like it is. A little harsh? Maybe. But hey, I'm just being honest.


I think its pretty straight forward. Keeping them honest and doesn't really divulge much. Had some success with it. I also made sure to put very outgoing and clear photos of myself to sorta couter bounce the slight pessimism I'm eluding to.

What do you guys think?

1. Don't brag. Tell them by your actions and frame.
"I don't like playing games and I'm straight to the point"
- No need to drill that into their head. Women are intuitive, they can tell just by reading your profile.

2. You're asking for someone with a sense of humor yet you showed none. You can be straightforward and funny at the same time. It's called cocky and funny. What your profile is pure cockiness, women don't like that.

3. There is a difference between being confident and being arrogant. You haven't showed any values on your profile yet you're acting like you're a prize. One look and they will say "who the fuck do you think you are" and walk away. You have to have great values to showcase and offer first, THEN you can act all cocky as you want.

4. "A little harsh? Maybe. But hey, I'm just being honest."
- Again really? Why the hell do you need to explain yourself to them over and over. You're just qualifying yourself to them and this reeks insecure. Doesn't really fit into the arrogant frame you're tying to pull. They can tell that you're just bluffing.

5. Qualifying is great to create interests and rapport. That is AFTER you created some comfort first. If you go straight up to someone without saying hi and qualifying them, all you do in the mind is trying to judge them without getting to know them first. Red flag.

The best way to write a profile is keep it light and humorous. You can be straight to the point with it. But don't explain yourself over and over. If they're curious, they will ask you. Also provide some values first before asking for high standards. A beggar can't really choose what he wants to eat, he eats what he can get.

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Hey. Thanks for the intuitive and well detailed response. I tend to agree that the profile does seem to be quite arrogant. From my experience on these websites is that you want to create a spark of interest. Become memorable and I've had success in getting several responses from women with that mentality. I've seen so many profiles that are so mundane and dull and reek the stench of neediness. I guess I took it too much to the extreme and became the opposite. Over-zealous and quickly forgettable.

All I'm looking to do is improve and learn. I'm been enlightened by PUA for a couple years now and I think its created this ying-yang sort of binary. For as much as its improve my life, its also given me the NASTY habit of over-thinking everything!!!! I'm the type of person that likes to think critically and outside the box and sometimes does not know when to turn it off.