Hey guys, so I am very new to this site/world of PUA and am learning lots. I have been using POF on and off with VERY VERY VERY poor results for a few years. I recently decided to spend the time to make a really funny profile that shows my personality, and add some better pictures, and I have noticed at least quadruple the response rates. Then I read some of the advice on this forum, and it's probably 10-15x what it used to be. So overall, thanks guys, you're a great help. I just wanted a second opinion on my profile. I have a million questions for you guys, but I will do my diligence of reading the forum for a while before I do this.

They wouldn't let me post the link so I have my forum ID here: 39739307
If you go to any POF profile and remove those numbers with mine, it should work.
Thanks!

K brosky, I haven't really read the profile in detail and plucked it word for word, but here is what I noticed.

1.) You have defeatist comments at the top about the website. Just take that stuff out. If you don't like something about the website then put it in the forums or contact the owners. Owners for the most part never read profiles unless peopel have nude photos on them.

2.) Why are you talking about all the women you've been with and your ex-gf's? Just take that stuff out bro please lol.

3.) Your telling girls how you have too much on your plate and won't have time to spend with them? Not attractive. Looking busy is one thing, workaholic is another.

4.) Comments about rapists no no.

Ok here's what needs to happen. You need to just completely restructure your entire opening statement bro. It's too long, and has too many no no's. You look like your trying too hard.

On a positive note, if that's your profile picture you look like a healthy and attractive guy. You need to play to what strengths you already have. You have topless photos but they're on the beach. Make sure you mention how much you love the beach on your profile. Make sure you put up a couple of pictures of you in normal clothes too. Shirtless is good in a few photos, all photos though is too much. Pick maybe your favorite 2.

Bro now I see a huge reason why you haven't gotten any traction. You put unemployed living with parents. That's never a good thing to do. I know you want to be honest, but seriously bro do not sabotage yourself. Just put that your a student or live with "roommates". The above is enough to kill your game. Always, always direct questions away from where you stay or how you get income. Just completely avoid the subject if possible. Hotels exist for a reason.

Anyways, yeah, work on your profile bro. Just restart from the bottom up. Your profile looks really negative and you look like your "stuck" in a certain part of your life. Fix it