Hey, I'm new to the game and thought I'd post my profile for review. Have at it, and be harsh:

/profile/omotenium

It needs a little wotk, bro.

Spice up the written portions with some humor and slight cockiness.

You need more, and better pics. I think if you browse through the forums, you'll get the idea.

One other piece of advice I'll offer is this, stay off online dating sites over the weekends and on holidays. Especially since you are in your early 20's. I just looked really quick and noticed you were logged in. When you've been messaging women and they're starting to get attracted they will sneak a peak at your profile to see when the last time is you've logged in. A young 20yr old guy logged into a dating site on Friday night doesn't help DHV at all.

Good Luck!

Thanks, good advice!

I'm sorry, but this is over-analyzing at its worst.

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Okay. Go online every weekend and holiday then. I've got better things to do like party's and my gf. ;0|

Seriously, being on PoF or Cupid at midnight on friday, saturday, or christmas day chicks think WTF??? Does he have any friends.....

NOT over analyzing. Your post is to dis me, is really gonna confuse this poor guy....

I agree about the weekend thing. Absolutely do not be online friday/sat. Girls WILL notice this. I had my best success from sunday/monday and organising meetups during the week.

Also I think you need to change up your pic. First you need more than one and they need to be fun or active. Don't do the standard mugshot mate.

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I've noticed zero difference sarging online during weekend nights compared to any other time. Perhaps some girls do notice, but the question is, do they care? Not in my experience.

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The Platinum Rule of Pick-Up: "Progress tension instead of lessening it with social behavior."

Yes they do. It lowers your value, plain and simple. It portrays you have no life, no friends, and looks desperate.

But according to your posts your game is so tight you can put up crappy pics. We're posting to a newb request. NOT a online pua ace, like yourself.

Are you having a bad day, or something? The venomous tone of that post is completely unwarranted.

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No. Very warranted. And back on topic please.............

Convenient.

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The Platinum Rule of Pick-Up: "Progress tension instead of lessening it with social behavior."

Underworlder and dlightmen:

You're both being too defensive. Lighten up and learn to let shit go before you feel like you need to put someone down or "teach them a lesson."