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Wow! really amazingly intelligent way of applying the stuff people suggested. I'm impressed. Last little thing. You don't want to talk about Exes to chicks unless they bring it up. You also only want to talk for about 2 seconds if they do. The parts of your message relating to exes leaves way too much room for the discussion to go sour. Cut out the ex stuff and talk about your mom. Girls kind of like when you talk about mom.
Thx Jits.. I finally went with it and sent it out.. We'll see what happens.. Hre's the final copy:
Hey.. I noticed you're wearing the feathers of a peacock in that photo.. that' says a lot about you right there..says you're into making a powerful statement. that's cool because a lot of girls i see around in LA aren't that unique with the colors that they wear.. show's you're kinda different from the bunch.. that's why the peacock stands out from all the other kinds of birds ya know..
You've also got this energy I'm sensing straight from your eyes.. i want to say alluring .. but it's something only an Aries would have.. I'm sorta on the fence though, Saggitarius. you've got that expression / free-spiritedness of one.. but i don't know
The name's Jay.. I'm kinda just taking in this whole social networking experience.. a couple friends got me on it saying it'd be good for auditions.. i don't know about that. it's more like a hub for people i hardly ran into back in college to add friend request me..
I'd like to chat a little bit more, but i have to finish reading this script.. it seems like there is some good energy emitting from you .. so let's talk soon...
What kinda things are you into, "xxx"?
-J
Serious?.I don't want to mock anyone on the forum so I wont. You should have taken the advice people gave you since you asked for help.
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