I'm worried about my profile DHV now, i'll work on the pictures later. Check out my profile and let me know of any adjustments I can add. I wanted to give off the intellectual, caring, sensitive, ambitious, confident side. http://www.okcupid.com/profile/PapaBear81

Thanks guys!

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Its a bit over the top. Besides that its a bit too long and you tell to much about your self. What is there to know about you after reading your profile? You need to show less of your self so the girl doesn't know who you are upfront but gets to learn/know who you are as she talks to you.

I agree. Plus I think you need a better picture of yourself and i mean this in the most respectful way, but it's a little bit dorky. I know you're not fat at all, but that pic doesn't show your muscle or anything. I think you need something tighter and more appealing to the ladies. Also try to inject a bit more cocky humour.

Plus I think your username gives off a bit of a creepy vibe.

Thanks for the great tips guys! This saturday, I'm going to a bar \ club in Joliet and will have my friends take pictures with any girls that I'm with. Also, I'll create a new profile too! Suggest any new screen names? Thanks!

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I would be more selective abotu what you are looking for.

Also it might be an idea to say something different than "looking for employment anywhere I can".

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First thing is you should really change up the pictures.

Photo 1) zoom the thumbnail in a bit more, keep all three guys but make sure it's not too distant. That first photo is the number one thing that will draw a girl into your profile. Good color and composition though, it'll work.
Photo 2) You look threatening and like you're posing...in a kitchen. Have a friend take a photo of you looking away from the camera talking to another friend (or just act like you are) OR a photo of you doing something funny/interesting.
Photo 3) You've got the right idea, maybe a little close...but not bad.
Photo 4) She might be your best friend...but she has got to go. A profile isn't about making your friends feel good cause you care...it's about the feeling the girls looking at it get.

The key thing about any PUA is to demonstrate that he has OPTIONS and that we are selective. Saying that they should "just ask you questions " is super AFC. Also...no emoticons unless you're using them purely to be funny.

I like the about me mostly. Change to "Awesome Uncle incredible friend" we want to stand out with the words and not blend in with "good."

As a 28 year old, saying you're looking for 18 year olds looks creepy. Narrow the age range a bit (18-45 is excessive) and show you're selective. That being said...you want to hook up with a Cougar/barely legal, she can still message you, and you her. It will just give you some more material to work with..on how she isn't your type/age.

Overall though, not a bad profile. I'm just being picky to try and help.

I don't know but for me this profile is ok. It is what an average person would have.

It is a profile that an older woman that is interested into a long term serious relationship would like. On the other hand it states that it is for short term dating :S. (These two contradict.)

For me that would be a big no no. If it wouldn't say relationship or lopen to my imagination on what he wants I wouldn't approach. If it is for me to find someone just for sex I would prefer to go out in a club and pick one. I wouldn't "order" him through the internet =P

I would prefer a profile with a bit of sense of humour, a bit of personality and in general a profile of a guy that screams " social person", interesting person, fun person.