Me
hey quick question
do u like whenguys call u cute, pretty or hot?
9:57amTrisha
any how
10:00amMe
ok ur none of those then ur "aight" u still kool with that
10:00amTrisha
sure
10:02amMe
u seem like u have a easy going personality today...what is it the weather over there or something
10:02amTrisha
its sunny
beginning to get warmer
10:04amMe
oh seems like u like that type of weather
10:04amTrisha
yes i do
10:06amMe
what do u do go to the beach n show off ur body to other girls
10:06amTrisha
well anyone who wants to watch
10:07amMe
u might get their boyfriends jealous u know
10:07amTrisha
i know
10:08amMe
ok good look with guys telling u to stop distracting thier other half
10:08amTrisha
lol
10:10amMe
what do u think is ur best trait?
n don't say ur ass
10:11amTrisha
my fun loving personality
10:12amMe
u sure cause underneath that u prolly will fuck a bitch up lol
however i give ur personality a 6.5 so far
10:14amMe
but what do u do? u put up mad pics or u like a hair model or something?
10:15amTrisha
it was nice chatting with u
10:18amMe
but we're not done yet is the other personality i describe before starting to come out
10:24amMe
oh i forgot to give u the signal sweetie its ur turn to respond

i wanna know what i did wrong and what i should be doing instead?

sounds kinda like u were tryin to hard

1. Your grammar should be better.

2. "I give your personality a 6.5 so far"

This is an insult and it's the reason she stopped talking to you.

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Don't take this the wrong way but... Geese Louise even I got annoyed reading that. You're like me a year ago (her name was Trish too, actually, but I learnt and ended up getting her)

Umm well, 'u sure cause underneath that u prolly will fuck a bitch up lol' is probably just about the worst thing to say after she says she has a fun loving personality.

The reason her answers are so short are because you're blatently trying to hit on her... badly. Pretty much she's saying 'alright hot pants, cool off, go have a wank or something, then come back and have a real conversation with me'

Creativity does not involve talking about her ass.

I really really hate to say this because you seem to be an alright bloke, but, that was the most AFC thing I have seen this year.

If you want my advice for the future, acknowledge that you were being a horny just-like-all-the-other-guys guy that was trying too hard to get somewhere (in a carefree quirky way). Then start talking to her about normal things, you know, stuff you would talk about with your mates, you can phase shift the other stuff in later (later that night if you do it right)

Hopefully you don't take this the wrong way, i'm just sayin' what I know.
Good things.

so what do u suggest i should do? still talk to her after a while n see what happens?

you blew it move on to the next!

You always switch subjects really fast so you never build a convo!

Also stay away from boring stuff like whats the weather like etc etc etc zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Well I suppose you could just keep fishing but really man it's up to you. I think you could learn some serious early-game skills by just trying to talk normally with this girl, it looks like you could use some practise.
Find a clever way to show that your not like that, i can't really think of something off the top of my head, just along the lines of 'hey sorry i was like that yesterday, turns out i have a fatal brain trauma and i must badly hit on every girl i know in order to recover (some lame funny joke here)'

And seriously, don't hit on a girl at 10am, even if you manage to turn her on, your not going to keep it that way, but otherwise, morning game just doesnt work, save it till the sun goes down.

Umm, take the advice of the other guys here, and try to find a common interest, hell, organise lunch or something once you got her talking. You gotta lot of work to do, but at least your sort of on the right track.

I'd just move onto the next. I feel like you're trying to "Game" to much and moving away from your personality. Here is what will help you, I believe:

1. As mentioned earlier, please clean up your grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I wanted to stab myself in the eye two sentences into it. It doesn't have to be perfect, but dear God.
2. You obviously have the confidence to try anything because some of the questions you asked where just so off the wall crazy and weird I'm surprised she let you go on so far.
3. Re-read what Glint said because that was rock solid. Imagine you were talking to one of your boys, or even a close friend that was a girl. You wouldn't be asking some lame internet pickup question every time you typed. Throw those small "PUA" techniques in every now and then (when a conversation starts to drag)
4. When you said a routine pick-up thing, you quickly ruined it with something else, for example "What do you think your best trait is" was a pretty decent question to get to know someone (I'd prefer "What do your best friends like about you so much" as I feel that is a more artistic way of saying it) Then after that you quickly ruin it, like saying "Don't say your ass."

You do seem like a decent guy, but you're ruining that by all these lame wanna-be game techniques. Based on your conversation, I can't judge the type of person you are at all, I feel like I'm reading a list of weird internet pick-up advice, and I'm sure she felt exactly the same as I.

what the hell does grammar have to do with anything???? is this a essay competition are something??? makes no fucking sense

Whoa bro dont bite the hand that feeds you, he's trying to help.

I don't type perfectly but I atleast try to make it a little more grammaricaly legiable.

Women are extremely sensitive to grammar. God knows why; it is one of those mysteries. My guess it has to do with the fact that women want a man who pays attention to details and who doesn't half-ass things. Once you start putting full effort into everything you do, women start to take notice. Just my experience.

"Leave everything better than you found it."

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