how do u think this convo is going?is it good or bad do u think i have a chance?tell me wat i can do to improve and errors... thanks for the help guys
me: dude whose the girl in ur pic shes cute u think u can hook me up?

her: ha what?

me: hahah nm wat are u up 2 girl?

her: Just tryin to do some homework, what about you?

me: right now i just got home from soccer practice so u look like a girl that likes to have fun r u?

her: Well what do you mean ha

me: just fun in general hang out go to partys u know...first of all wat do u think separtes u from all the other girls somthing interesting and not like, ooo one of my toes looks like a pinky lol

her: Haha. Well actually,i am quite the opposite of what you think i am. I have honestly never been to a party in my life,ive never even tasted alcohol and never done drugs. So i believe that alone separates me from alot of girls.

me: so im guessing thats wat u though that i thought about u? if that makes any sense lol and having fund dosent mean drinking and doing drung i dont do them b/c im an athlete yea boy lol and that good thats my kinda girl u getting some points here taylor lol do u play any sports?

she hasnt replied yet b/c i bearly sent her this message like 5 min ago and shes offline but do yall think its good so far or do i have to do somthing better?

your spelling is atrocious in that last message. I probably wouldn't have replied either.

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She's putting more effort into writing proper sentences so you should be trying to match that.

Your last message was pretty weak, you shouldn't bother explaining yourself (getting drunk, doing drugs bit) which you did well earlier. I find you can lose interest really fast by asking those typical questions like "do you play any sports?"

You should wait a bit for her to reply; I think you're getting too excited too early anyway. If she doesn't you can come back with a story implying you were busy with something interesting (big weekend party or something) and challenge her to come up with something more interesting for example.

she replied and said... haha yes I play Tennis but not for a team anymore.
what should i reply i want to make the conversation interesting also i would ask her for her # but i dont have my cell phone anymore so i cant do text game big disadvantage but ooo well wat do yall think i should reply?

wait a lil bit b4 replying.. if ive learned anythign from the book the game, next time she logs on , she will see that you read it but havent replied, she will start to wonder about why you havent replied yadda yadda.. you dont wanna come off too desperite.

How about replying later with "ok i know all you tennis type girls, all into art and nerdy, well im off to school now, we should hang out sometime".. try your luck

Make sure you use good spelling! I guess short-hand is one thing .. but at least try and make it look like you're not drunk and accidentally pressing random keys.. especially! when you're talking about not doing drugs and drinking! ha!

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ok that other reply about all tenis girls are into art and nerdy burned and crashed she replied....Im def not either of those ha but alright,byee .... so yea that sucked wat do yall think i should come back with so i can get her back even though i think she got mad or somthing so i need a good reply

you can't expect us to give you responses for every reply you make. You have to learn a bit by yourself.

I'm surprised she replied, that must mean she's interested in you at some level.
That last response doesn't sound like a crash and burn. You can reply like "Oh? so you're not like the others? What make you so special? lol you must be the party type then. Those are trouble, they never take things seriously, lol."

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