I'd get rid of pics 1 2 and 4. Pic one is small and you have your hands in your pocket. Pic two has the girl facing away from you. Pic 4 only because you have better pics of you with guy friends. Pic 3 would be great as your main pic IMO.
Your 'about me' is much too small. read this
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The "I will edit you paper" bit should be eliminated or said in a funner way.
also consider standing out by not filling out the areas like most guys.
here's my profile
http://www.okcupid.com/profile/xiagox/ I'm not saying it's perfect but it's something
also most of your reply rate will come from the opener not your profile really. What lines have you been using? Try creating a recon profile so you know what it is girls are experiencing/what not to do. I find I get the most replys from simple messages that force her to qualify like
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]something about the profile/her] you seem to have a level head, but are you interesting?
riddle me this,
what would your friends say about you if they talked to me?
make it interesting!