<online – AmericanSingles.com>
HB 8.5 to 9 (I couldn’t tell due to there being no body shots, so i’ll say 8.5)
About Me:
I am pretty fun...once ya get to know me. I love to read and drive...go to the beach. I am pretty spontaneous. i dunno you'll ahve to ask
This was her about me in her profile. There wasn’t much else to go on. Now I could have busted on her for being short (5' 4) but I was already busting on her for the about me, so I didn’t think of it.
Since I paid for 3 months on AS, and I only have used one, I may as well take advantage of it. And now that i’m in the game, rather than just throwing out AFC lines, (thanks to the AFC advice by countless online dating websites and articles) that got me no response whatsoever. This is the beginning of my practicing online game concurrently with real-life game.
I sent the following message:
Subject: gotcha
Message: you like to read & drive, AND go to the beach... i've got you pegged... you're totally the wild rebel nonconformist type. i can just feel it now, you getting bored of shopping and deciding on a whim to drive down to the beach, with your seat leaned comfortably back and the AC running, nose pressed into your book, driving with one foot resting on the steering wheel, and everyone diving out of your way lol.
btw, what kind of car you drive? (that way i can take cover whenever i see you on the road =P ).
I was going for a C+F response to her profile, so I reframed by jokingly misinterpreting her about me and busting on her for reading and driving at the same time. i’m not the most skilled on C+F responses, could you please critique?
Also, I layered NLP into the mix. I judged her to be a kinesthetic personality (NLP personality types) from her interests page and layered in words of a kinesthetic nature. I’m not sure if they integrate constructively or destructively with the C+F effect. What do you think? Does the NLP add in too many random details and take away from the cocky and funny angle, or does it help, or just work on a completely different level?
I would have tried layering sexual subcommunications in also, but then my message would be getting ridiculously long and probably lose all impact, so I didn’t do that – if she replies, i’ll do it then
any comments? better ideas for responses (for future reference)?
CHAT