Help me out, i've been getting a lot of rejections recently.. tell me what you think.. my username is shakesula (sorry cant post links yet)

Ok in my opinion it does need a lot of work. Start by posting some pics on hotornot.com to see which are the best and I'd shoot for a little more variety. Play around with cropping some shots. A music shots is good, but maybe more of you doing something else. Do you have any with any women? I think having good photos is super key. I mean this in the most constructive of ways but your profile shot has a little of this look to it (youtube search pedophile beards)

The description is pretty vanilla too. I think you can get some good ideas if you spend some time browsing this forum and searching out other resources. There is a lot of information you can track down.

Props to you for having the self awareness and taking the time to improve.

Disclaimer: I am still an AFC, so take my advice with a grain of salt.

I agree with jkenpo on the vanilla part. You need to create some sort of mysteriousness about yourself so that you intrigue the women who see your profile to respond. My profile's pretty boring too, so if you find a good way of doing this, feel free to share it!

Oh, and this line at the end: "I'll do anything to make a girl smile " ... tsk tsk. Comes off as needy and weak. She needs to think of you as a challenge, and that one line right there definitely doesn't help.

I think this is reasonable advice, but hopefully one of these mPUA's here can back me up, since I wouldn't want to steer you in the wrong direction.

I doubt your username is the reason for the rejections. You need to give women a reason to want to talk to you. Snappy titles work or even doing some photoshop on your pic. Below is what I did. I'm not the best looking guy but I do really well over the internet.

well thanks for the advice guys I do appreciate it, I hear what your saying about the "I'll do anything to make a girl smile" line, that will definetly go, and I'll be putting up some more pics of me in different situations and making my description stand out more to be more witty and cocky.. stay tuned for the updated version!