OK am using stories to show higher value online and am not quite there and would love you opinions and views on this lastest thing!

I was walking down the road whilst shopping, and am minding my own business just thinking to myself feeling relaxed.
BAM!
This girl kissed me on the cheek and hugs me so hard it hurt. So am looking at her in shock thinking "WHO, are you."
She hugs me again and asks me how I am, at the is point am thinking "Is she a mate I forgot about" because I have a wide socail circle and its east to lose track.
So Then am worrying because I don't want to offend a friend, so I go along with it and answer her question like I know him.
She asks me why I didn't call her, am that confused i actually answer, "I losed your number sorry. "SHIT, now she think i know her lol.
So she hugs me again and by now am thinking 'I have to stop this before it get out of hand!'
So then she leans in and says, "YOU, were the greatest lay of my life."
I was in utter shock, i mean i like a compliment but i don't know her.
"Who do you think i am?"
I swear I am in so much shock.
It turns out she thought I was a guy called Gerard, who she spent the entire weekend with and get this, she showed me pictures of her and this, he is the spit of me. CRAZY!
She then starts welling up, about to cry, so I grabbed her took control and took her for a coffee.
She asked for my number, "Sorry, you’re in love with a guy who is the spit of me."
That’s the last time I hope that happens!
I mean that stuff happens all the time lol....

Suggestions WANTED!

Well it shows pre-selection, you having high standards and looking after a girls emotions. I'd certainly give it a field test - that's the only way of knowing for sure that it will work; however, before trying it here are my feelings about it.

1)It's very long for an online story. In person it doesn't really matter if your story is that long, but online a long story can make it look like you are trying too hard because it takes a while to type something like that!

2) You *might* fall victim to falling into the "bullshit" category or the "bragger" category, as the DHVs are pretty blatant and the scenerio is believable but only just.

I would stay away from DHV stories and use DHV "items" instead for online game. What a I mean byt "items", is mention something unique/interesting that you have done or take part of. This can be anything from traveling (girls seem to have a thing for traveling), your job, an event that you took part of etc. The main I think DHV "items" are better is that they are a lot shorter than any DHV can be, and they have the exact same out come. Plus the girl can ask you about them and making online conversation easier as you don't have to think about what to say next, let alone how to forum it to grab her interest.