Some feedback please?

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member10596016.htm

The about me section comes off as too salesman like and you are qualifying your self like an AFC as well. Redo your about me and actually say something about your self with saying your different from those "jerks". Because girls really have no idea until they get to know you different and actions always speak louder than words. Your first date part is perfect tho. Tho you may run into some girls thinking you just want sex and not a relationship.

That profile looked great to me. Do you get messages?

What's the date??

Please re-evaluate... I've changed it (hopefully for the better).

Hell, I like it.

Much much better.

That is very good and original. I actually read it all!

The profile info is really good actually, a very interesting read.

Just a question tho - have you received alot of messages?

If there was any suggestion for improvement I think the "To Qualify for a date" part could be revamped or taken off as it may discourage girls from making contact (that's my opinion anyway)

The thing with dating sites is there are girls that only look for sex (just like guys do) and the girls that are looking for a relationship.

The girls who want sex obviously want to know your genuine but they also want to know that ur not gunna be expecting too much too soon!

Where as the girls who want a relationship will take their time in getting to know you pending on your game and how much they really want to find a guy.