Hey guys, I'm back into the dating game, been out for a while now and I'm gonna try POF this time and would any of you guys supply some feedback or any type of improvement that will make my profile stand out, let me know what you guys would include if this was your profile. Thanks a milli!
Profile
Allow me to introduce myself, I’m 22 and I'm more than the usual amount of interesting, good energy, and funny guy, so you'd better like to laugh. I don’t play little girls games or deal with pity drama, And I don’t get intimidated by any girl or group of people I meet; so be nice, I’m cool guy and realistic and I’m not so easily pushed around by others. Just because two people argue, it doesn't mean they don't like each other. And just because they don't argue, it doesn't mean they do. My 3 valuables assets are my sense of humor, confidence and empathy to people who are close me. I talk a lot, but I listen to and I mean really listen to what people are saying. My goal in life is to live as intensely, richly, and purposefully as possible. I’m Completely drug free, NO KIDS but I love kids, DON'T SMOKE, and I don’t have a DRINKING PROBLEM. I got a job so you won’t have to spoil my sexy ass unless you’re rich lol, and My personality is different from other guys and sex isn't the only thing on my mind, I seek spiritual enlightenment too. If you want to grow spiritually and creative, then you’re the kind of girl I want to get to be around. I love women with a passion, I love the fact that I can't understand everything about them, I even love it when they act crazy sometimes; But I see the best in people. I won’t judge you or the people you hang out with.

So what did you feel or think when you read this ?

Overall it seem AFC as you come off as qualifying your self. There a few alpha male things but they are very light if that. Redo your profile with a more alpha male mindset.

Okay, there's a lot to go with on there, which might be the problem. I've tried the whole dating site thing before, and you know how I got so many responses and interest? I didn't bother adding an "about me" bit.
I completely forgot! From what I gathered from that is women are interested in the photo and the questionaire. Maybe I'm wrong, but maybe as guys already tell too much in their descriptions, perhaps they're more attentive to those who add a little mystery.
Just narrow the thing down to something brief.
I've hilighted some of the points that maybe you should delete.
I'm sorry, but women on dating sites are either A, already popular with guys and are just doing this for an ego boost, or B, they're very self conscious about themselves and this is a last ditch effort for them.
Don't scare them away.[/b]