I'm a native English speaker, and I'm trying to improve my Spanish so I can communicate better with girls if I ever go to Spain, Mexico, South America, etc.

I'm starting a journal and writing in it everyday to try to improve my Spanish. If there are any native Spanish speakers out they, would you mind critiquing my writing so far?

"En mi cuaderno, yo deberia ser por escrito todos los dias. Porque no tengo un clase de espanol, necesito comprender mas espanol. En el parte del ano cuando no tengo un clase de espanol, yo deberia escribir los algunos pasando del dia."

It's supposed to say...

"In my notebook, I should be writing everyday. Because I don't have a Spanish class, I need to understand Spanish better. In the part of the year when I don't have a Spanish class, I should be writing the things that happen in the day."

How does it sound? Thanks guys.

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