Hey guys,

This is my first LR so i'd appreciate any tips or critisim after as i would like to improve my story telling as well as my game.

It was a Friday night and a friend of mine rang me to say he got 2 tickets to a gig in the acadamy, too many dj's. I said why not I'd go out and enjoy myself. We got there and the place was full of HB's, HB 8's 9's 10's, you name it they we're there. I though to myself that this was my friends night I wouldnt game and just have a few drinks with him. So as the night went on I got progressevly got more drunk and it struck me that we should be out gaming.

We ended up in a club in Dublin and I opened the first set I seen. A Hb 7 and her friend were standing at the bar.

Dublin: Can you Irish dance?!
Hb 7: No
Amog: I can
Dublin: show me what you got

The conversation went on longer for that but that was the jist of it. The amog kept trying to show me up but I froze out the Hb and she was on her own, I had befriended the Amog. The Hb then was all over me trying to get me to dance with her. I made her qualify herself to me with qualification statements, but I also jumped through one or two of her hoops not thinking straight.

The club closed and the 4 of us went for food. I was getting on well with her Amog friend. It turned out that our houses were in the same direction and I said we'd share a taxi. Her Amog friend came in the taxi with us and my friend left.

We ended up back at their appartments and he went into another friends. Isolation. Perfect.
She invited me in to show me the place. This is where it got tricky. It got passionate in the elevator on the way up but when we got there she boiled the kettle and made tea. She said to me that it was getting late and I suggested that we go lie down.

We got to the bedroom and she changed as I got undressed. And then it happened, in the blink of an eye... LMR. My mind went blank.

Hb: I dont usually do this
Dublin: Neither do I
HB: Ok lets just stop

We lay there and I was kicking myself thinking of what to do. We fell asleep and woke a few min's later doing the same thing. Finding ourselves having the same, "I dont usually do this" conversation. Eventually we finally did F-close and I left for work the that morning.

As I analised the night in my head the other night I realised that I hadnt built enough comfort with her in the first place. If I had of built enough comfort I wouldnt have gotten so much LMR and a simple freeze out would have done the job. You guy's got any opinions?

regards,

Declan "Dublin"

Maybe give more comfort to the girl once you've disarmed the AMOG, maybe get your friend to talk to him while you isolate the girl earlier and talk and *-close. It'll probably be easier to full-close if you've both gotten to alone with her a bit before.

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"men who say it cannot be done should not interrupt men doing it"

This is equivalent to:

HB: Take responsibility and fuck me.
Dublin: No sorry I'm not a man.
HB: Ok that's a shame guess we can't have sex then.

Oh good lordy, that's not LMR mate...big mistake!

That's her saying: "TAKE RESPONSIBILITY AND FUCK ME NOW!"

When she says 'I don't usually do this', she has already presupposed that you two are going to have sex. Furthermore, the subcommunication is that you are about to do it right now - she's just asked you to take responsibility so she can backward rationalise next morning that one thing led to another, or 'YOU seduced HER', so she doesn't feel like a slut.

So, she asks for sex, and you said no! Haha. As soon as you said that I bet she felt so shit. Lucky you still got the close. Good work on your first ONS buddy =) Congrats.