Well this is my first story posting here and since it happened last night I figured it'd be nice to get some critique and evaluation on my current level of game and what needs improvement. Bear with me as I haven't perfected my written storytelling abilities yet


Generally when I go to parties I pick one girl who I'm going to go after and if I don't get her then my game ends. This has helped me refine my game as I know that I have to play things perfectly as I'm not going to give myself a second chance with somebody else. I'm also genuinely one of the nice guys but I have the nice guy/asshole routine down to a science


Last night I went to my friend's birthday party in LA and our DJ introduced us to the girl who worked at the store and hooked us up with the alcohol for the party. She was an HB.7 as she hadn't dressed up much (my friends put her at an 8-9 though) and had just come off a 13 hour shift at work. After a brief introduction and two minute chat I told her I had to go enforce the party as over 300 people had showed up and left her in mid-sentence.

About an hour later she was sitting down on the patio and I sat down in the chair in between her and my other friends and the convo went something like this once I have my first compliment

ME: I love the look, are you in an indy rock band?
HB7: No but I do web design and promotions for a few local bands in San Diego
ME: I'm from San Diego, which ones?
HB7: NO WAY! blah blah blah and pulls out a cigarette (for some reason being from san diego gives an automatic advantage)
ME: "Here", I pull out my sweet lighter and put my arm around her and light it for her. This lighter always gets compliments.

we talk for a few more minutes and then I start talking with my friends on the other side of me and ignore her for another few minutes until the first fight of the party starts breaking out. I grab her hand and help her up on the chair so she can see the fight as she's only a mere 5' tall. she makes a comment how she's barely taller than me now and I move back against her while still ignoring her and talking to my friends leaving her with few options to get my attention as I find it more fun to entice the them to make the first move rather making it myself.

While watching the fight with my arm around her and still ignoring her I tilt my head a little leaving her an opening to make a move which she does. To get my attention away from my friends she starts kissing my neck. I kiss her back once and go back to my friends by which she responds with tilting my head towards her for another kiss. The making out and groping starts here and continues for a few until my friends notice and start cheering because we're all funny like that. I decide to test her a little.

ME: How do you like the audience?
Sara: It's fucking great but there's too many people (telling me she's an exhibitionist)
ME: ...So lets go..
Sara: ...inside (she finishes the sentence)

As we walk around to go inside about 6 cop cars show up because of the fights and she gets worried about getting an MIP because she only has a month until her 21st birthday. I decide to pull my alpha male act and tell her to stay where she is. I go up to the first cop out of my car, introduce myself and ask if they're here to break up the fight and ask how i can help. After a few minutes of helping him out we go sit outside and I test her again while making out by slyly putting her hand on my crotch to see what response it elicits and got the right reaction.

I admit I was born blessed and use that to my advantage to pique interest so as soon as I got the right reaction she wanted to see how big it was proceeded to start giving me head right on the neighbors driveway which was unfortunately immediately disrupted by the owner of the house coming home so we proceed to my car since the cops are still clearing out the house and we continue in there. After a few minutes she looks down and actually notices the size and like most girls I've hooked up with immediately want to have sex instead but not first without the brief previous sexual experience talk to which she tells me that it's only been 9 months since she lost her virginity less than 9 months ago and has only had sex with her previous boyfriends.

I then shut her up and she climbs on top right in the car until her co-workers show up 2 hours late and see us in the car to which she could care less at this point..

Then as we walked back into the house one of the girls asked where we were and before I could say anything sarcastic she blurts out "We just had the best sex ever and he's huge.... I'm going to go have a cig" and walks outside. of course she says this loud enough for even the people outside to hear and i'm sitting there in front of 30 people with my jaw hanging open until about 10-15 guys come up to shake my hand and ask where I learned to do that.

I'll stop here even though there's quite a bit more that happened the rest of the night as it's a bit graphic and unnecessary despite the hilarity aspect of the entire rest of the night

As mentioned from my first post on this site, my biggest weakness in my game is making the first move since I lack the practice as I've always had more fun enticing girls into doing it first. If there's anything else I should implement/remove, do more/less of, or change up any advice would be great.
Advice about closing the less aggressive and more reserved girls would be great as I actually have to make the first move with them.