So i was at the club the other night and i was just chillin with my cousin.. so i see set of 4 girls to our left but with a bunch of guys grabbing them and trying to dance with them.. so i see this one girl separates from the group for a second.. she comes over and asks my cousin for a lighter, he gives it to her and she steps away but lingers for a second, so i took the opportunity.

Without having a routine in mind i just walked up to her thinking i gotta say something.. so i go up to her and im like :
me: you shouldn't be smoking, thats really bad for you and its a turn off for most guys
her: i know i need to stop.
me: whats worst is that i just came over here to ask you for a pull
(she then holds the cigarette up for me to take it.. i then took her hand put it up to my lips and i took a drag while she was holding it. (she smiled) (i thought was kinda smooth)
her: so whats your name?
me: *my name*, whats yours?
her: Trisha
me: ok cool.
*i was wearing a black dogtag that was blank, she grabs it and asks me "why is it blank?"
me: because i'm still looking for a girl's name to put on it.. but Trisha sounds like it might work (eye contact and smile)
her: smile
me: so when are you gonna stop hanging with those wack ass guys (nodded my head towards the guys i mentioned earlier) and come kick it wit me?
her: i know i'm trying to ditch them but they keep coming around
me: ok look, just stick with me for tonight and they wont come around anymore.
*we went into the club danced for like 20 sec then started making out on and off throughout the rest of the night*

I thought this was a successful pick up, i didn't use any routines, just what came to mind.. i just want some feed back, was it good or bad? what should i have done or not done? and i wouldn't mind getting some props if you feel credit is due. lol

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That's a nice one bro. Completely smooth. Your confidence and not giving a fuck mentallity really kicked it with this girl. You treated her like she was yours from the first second and that must have impressed her for good. Keep on doing this and you'll be getting laid a lot! Some people might say that changing names so early is not a good idea, because it decreases your level of misteriousness, but hey... it worked...

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