So after going to the local club about 2 days ago I thought I would read and learn a bit more with being a PUA. I decided to go out with a friend to club of his choosing. So we went in there tried to DHV (don’t know if it worked) with the bouncers by being friendly and also by conversing with random groups and other acquaintances. We then sat down at one of the seating areas when I seen a girl I had recognized back last week at another club while trying to run game on. She locked eyes and I gave her the “don’t I recognize you” face, smiled and approached.

Me: “Don’t I know you from somewhere?”
Girl: (Hug) “Holy... its you. How have you been?”
Me: “Well you know robbing banks takes most of my time.”
Girl: (Laughs and recognizes my friend from last week too)
Me: “You sure get around.”
Girl: “Yea was bored at home”

Just then a guy she met last week at the club came over and she did the same (hug). The guy then asked her “How she’s been doing?” and “So what are you up to?” MY friend then whispered to me “N-close, alpha male him.” So that exactly what I did, with a time constraint close.

Me: “I have to go meet with some friends now. You have a number? Next time we can plan on wearing matching clothes.”
Girl: “I have a boyfriend.”

By this time the random guy was standing there while we talked and I took the “I have a boyfriend” response as one of the "tests" (I could have been wrong).

Me: “I didn’t ask if you had a boyfriend, I just asked if you had a number.”
Girl: “Of course. Its xxx-xxxx.”
Girl went to give me a high five but I faked it and moved my hand away.
Girl: “Oh yeaa! You like to play games like this. Come on how about a real one.”
Me: “I’m sure you deserved it by now.”
Girl: (Laughing) “You’re such a douche.”
Me: “That’s my middle name.”
Girl: “What’s your first name?”
Me: “Vice”
Girl: “Do you remember my name?”
Me: “Oh yea. Marie!”
Girl: “What?! Noooo”
Me: “Christine?”
Girl: (Laughing) “Oh my god”
Me: “I’m sure I remembered the right name... April...”
Girl: (Light punch) “Jeez you always fool around.”
Girl: (Laughs) “Since I know your first and your middle name. What’s your last name?”
Me: “Girl we just met. Have to keep things secret for the second date.”
Girl: (Laughs and smiles)
Me: “Well I better get back to my friends.”
Girl: (Hug) “Yea me too. Text me sometime.”

Now I know it’s kind of on the long side but if you can give me some feedback where I could have improved or done differently to have things work any better then what I did would help me a lot. Im still in the learning phases. I’m pretty excited for my very first close.

I think you did great bro, not being amog'd and all.
Good frame and your lines were by the book!

Thanks I was trying to stray away from the text book lines but I'm getting the hang of coming up with things on the spot.