If you read this, please post suggestions! Thanks

Overall: They were sitting beside us on the lounge and I needed sth to light my cigarrete.. I asked them if they had a lighter. One girl (HB8) said she didn't but her friend (HB3) had matches. So, of course I asked her to light my cigar to me. All in CF and etc. Then the HB8 said "you smoke and you don't bring a lighter" in a CF way. I responded with "do you think I'm pretending to smoke just to hit on you? a guy like me doesn't need this kind of thing". Proceeded with the talk which was going very well and then I got out from the group and got back to my friend. We kept talking and went to the dancing floor. Some time later we decided to start our game. Actually, it should have been started much earlier but the place was so empty that there was almost no chick to play with. So, we got into the lounge again and I walked towards the two girls I mentioned before. They were sitting on a sofa and there was a chair in front of it. I just got there and sat. Started with "ok, now I don't wanna smoke. don't you think people here are a bit anti-social? you seem like anti-social (hahah)" They responded in a very positive way and I started talking with them. We talked in 15 minutes about stuff like music, indie people, I've found out that she is a nerd and I told her that I've had my days as well, talked about movies and I ran some routines on them (to get them talking and to DHV). Always in CF, negging the Hb8 like hell and interrupting her. When I started to get IOI's I started to qualify her. I think here is where I started to do things wrong. I qualified her and she was VERY receptive. My friend then came into the group and we kept talking.. it was easier now to entertain them and think better because I had a wing with me. We've talked about our signs and horoscope stuff. I did some DHV jokes. Then, after 20 minutes since I started this conversation, she said "ok, let's hit the dancefloor! you don't wanna stay here talking, right?". To me it was a CLEAR sign of interest. So we went off to the dancing floor.. We got there and I told to her friend "I'm going to steal you friend, I'm sorry". The HB8 said then "what?". I pointed to another place and she pretended she didn't understand. Then I did the move to kiss close her, she stepped back. Then, she told me that there is a boy she likes that was going there this night.. They've been going out for 5 months and he is going to london. I sincerely believe this is complete bullshit but.. Anyway, I numberclosed her and she said "call me and we can go out sometime" she also asked me to add her on facebook and myspace.

The goods about this one:
-Almost zero approach anxiety
-Good opening (very receptive)
-CF running fine
-Getting IOI's on the right time
-I've kept my frame most of the time

The mistakes I won't repeat:
-I didn't kino escalate at all
-I've almost skipped the attraction phase to comfort (i should have built more attraction on the dancing floor to KC her later on the right time)
-She was giving IOIs and so I thought she was ready to fall.. At this point I turned game mode off.
-Didn't run any comfort routine or game on her.
-Did only one cold reading.

I tnk you tried to kiss clsoe her way to early you could have used the dance floor to your advantage also to build up kino as well.

Otherwise sounds like you did good. Did she end up spending the entire night with you i mean that guy didn't show up, you coulda used some destoryers int hat situation.

Actually I left the Venue a few minutes after this took place. I was with a friend and we were not feeling good.

But thanks, I agree that I tried to KC too damn soon. If it's of anyone's interest, I can post here what I've set as my new goals to improve my game. It's a list with all the things I need to add to it with some details.

sure, go ahead, self feedback and new goals is constructive.

Honestly I wouldn't worry about it so much eventually it will all just come naturally. Remember people hook up all the time without using the game. The game is a break down of the values that work when with girls. Girls are attracted to 3 things: Confidence, Challenge (playing hard to get, aka negs and freeze outs, pivots, DHV, ...), and Self-Control.

I think if you showed her some more fun points about yourself and teased her a lil more and then isolated and went for the kiss u prob would have had her.