All right so me and my buddies hit the bar last nite and i went there
With the peacock theory in mind n took a nice slim black tie and boy did
It work wonders. So we get there have a few beers ect. Hit the dance floor
And as im dancin i see a 4 set of ladies on the floor just starrin and smilin
Lookin at my tie until i approach with

"u know its rude to stare" lol
I keep dancing and just smilin at them then suddenly a grl grabs me by the tie n we
Just start dancin haha it was a blast probably the highlight of my night.
I then back off of them because i hear its always best to do so first or something like
That to not seem clingy or watever. I then see the set of ladies exit the floor by a neear by table n i approach. They compliment me by my flashy tie saying they love it and love how i dance.
They then said "loose the beared and mustache" lol ouch, (was that them neggin me?)
They said that they were here to help me out haha as we continue talkin i have my arms
Over them tryin to kino escalate. Now this is the thing while in the enteraction i think i screwed it up by how i was talking to them. I had my arms over them both while i would lean in closer or
Repeat my self to each gril. Like if i said something to one grl i would go lean to the other grls ear
And tell her what i said. Also, i notice one of the grls face kind of go dull because i was mainly focusin on the other girl. I then said this trying to go for a kiss close hahaha

I told them both, as i slowered my speech, " i notice that we all here have something in common, we have full lips"
They complied. I said
"its actually rare to find ladies witb full lips. And its a shame that they arent used correctly"

I then said if they care to demonstrate how a kiss with one with full lips would feel. They
Said no not even on the cheek. She then said she was married .
i then told one girl that their husbands are lucky and if they had me id keep
Them up all night" lol this had them estatic she said "sorry shes married" i was like
"ouch ur leavin me with blue balls" lol i ended the set in good terms and they said to
Shave the stach n beared , theyll be here next week,

After that my game got dull and i got real hammered still approachin,open,dancin,
But got lots of rejections due to sloppy drunk game, no good.

I saw a fee girls from the previous night but got AA when i saw one that actually
Liked me but her friends cb -,- she walked right infront of me smiled n said hi
I chickened out!!!!! any openers i can use to get her?

I was thinkin of this one because i know ill see her again.
Okay walk up then open with

Me: hey there. Has anyone ever told u you resemble a butterfly?
Her: no hehe
Me: its true. You walk into the room steal evryone attention wit ur beauty
And then flutter away leavin u wantin more.

Well? Too much? Haha

Now for the questions.

Where do u think i messed up and could do better on?
Should i take the advice and shave?

Sounds like you did pretty well. initially while reading this I was thinking "Screw them, look how you want to look" I have a beard and mustache as well, but thinking back, I actually can't come up with one well known PUA who does have facial hair? Maybe we should shave bro lol! Also for kiss close a lot of times it's better not to verbalize it. Create some escalation, phase shift, and go for it. Also in The Game, style has an excellent kiss close routine which I have tried and is very successful, where by you tell the girl she wants to kiss you example "It looks like you wanted to kiss me?" Works well for me. NEVER ask if she wants you to kiss her.

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Yeah, i just notice that too, maybe we should shave lol

I know i missed up by being verbal i'll just go for a kclose next time and take a slap haha