A little background of myself. I'm 20 years old, average looking guy, relatively new to pick-up. Had some success before reading about pick-up but starting to catch up a bit.

I went to the table where they sat and opened with "Hi! did you attend the fashion show earlier?" (there was one in my city)
Targets friend: "no we didnt!"
target: "where was that?"
and we talked about it for a while and went to other topics.

I tried not to talk to my target too much and tried to get her friends approval which wasnt that difficult. Then I invited my target more to the conversation and negged her on how she tried to impress me with her good grades in school and so on. They both thought it was funny and I got them to laugh alot. I then told them I had to go back to my friends really soon and they said they were going to another bar and that I should join them.

Me: "I'll maybe show up later, gonna hang out with my friends now. Let me get your number (target)"

She gave me her number and we hugged.

I went to the bar later and saw them sitting at a table. I went to order drinks with my friends and talked to a HB7 bartender, made her laugh, which i dont know if my set saw.

After a while i rejoined the set and we started talking about everything and i managed to neg my target some more, also got IOIs. She asked me if i was single and told me I would have success in life and so on. I Kinoed her a little by touching her shoulder, which was smooth in my opinion.

We then later went home, just me and her, she lives near me. As we were about to separate out ways we hugged again and she told me I should join them to the club on friday.

Opinions? what should've I done different and so on? shoot!