So 2 of my friends and these 2 girls left a club party and went back to my apartment to rewind and relax. I was really into one of the girls, so i flirted with her quite a bit. I teased her, made fun of her for stuff that was funny abt her. She did flirt back sometimes, but it was hard to tell how interested in me she was. She smiled at me a lot when I talked and laughed at my jokes. The only problem was I couldn't get her alone since she was worried abt her girlfriend who had already hooked up with one of my friends. So I ended up driving her and her friend back, and in the car I contd the flirting as both of us were playing with the ac, turning it on/off etc. I failed to get her number but I really wanna see her again and get to know her better so I decided the message her on facebook. What should I write to her? Thank you!

I'm an AFC...but here's my advice. Can a proper PUA please tell me if this is good or not.

You should say something along the lines of...
"Hey, I had a really good time the other night with you and your friend. [talk about something that you talked about most that night here]. Anyway, we should hit the club or something again soon. Catcha later"

Not asking for her # or making arrangements will make it seem like you arn't really that keen on seeing her again and you were just msging to be friendly?
I dunno, this is just how I would do it and hope she replies with something like sure how about this time / date, etc. Therefore making it look like she is the one wanting to meet up with me.

I hope that you were giving her friend attention too, and not making her the awkward 3rd wheel. Tell her to come and tag along with you while you go run an errand (this worked for me yesterday when i asked an exotic dance to "tag along" with me at the mall while i picked out my bro's x-mas gift.

be ready to have pleanty of games to play, (these really brought her out of her shell: Scariest moment, sharing scar stories, (while window shoping) at the count of three point to the favorite thing in the window (whatever she picks say "really?! that looks aweful! even if she picks the same thing you did, just say"I was just messing what i really think looks cool is that over there!"

but anyways, invite her do something you're already doing