I'm new to the game and last night was the first time really trying some of the material. anyways im in this club with my mates for a 21st bday. we get our friend about 10 shots when out of the corner of my eye i see two HB7.5 looking over and laughing. i decide to walk over and open with
"you're the type of girls my mother warned me about when i was young"
HB (non target) "why is that?"
me "looking over and thinking you can make fun of my m8 with his shots"
now HB (target) tries to talk and i interrupt asking non target "Wow how rude and demanding is she always like this?"

Anyway conversation continues for a few mins then i excuse myself to be with my birthday friend.

Later in the night i notice my bday friend has used my initial ice break to go and chat to my target, undettered i proceeded to put the moves on the non target and eventaully K closed. the funny thing is that later in the night my original target slipped me her number to get in contact.

Any suggestions of where I could improve that set?

The Lazz