I can sense that the whole narration has quite a rough transition.
Okay, let's point out some of the errors.
The answer to her shit test was a bit AFC.
Your friend ruined your ego a 'lil bit.
Here's the big stick.
HB: Well I already told Jim and Steve I'd wait for them.
Me: Alright whatever. (went without her)
Okay, here's the thing that I learned from studying PU and with regards to Grungey10.
You have to have a take it or leave it attitude with women.
Your answer to the shit test, your 'excuse' for your friend's comment and you answer to her rejection was a bit off and a 'lil AFC. It's hard to explain, but here's a sample.
HB9: I'm awesome- do you think you'll be able to keep up with me?
ME: No no. Will YOU be able to keep up with me. Looking at you right now, you don't seem to be getting there.
My friend, whose always C&F, goes- Did you tell her your gay yet? (loudly)
ME: (Extra cocky tone) Oh no! Why didn't you tell her we were gay?!
HB: Well I already told Jim and Steve I'd wait for them.
ME: Well, look, you're with me right now and Steve and Jim are still in there enjoying themselves. If you can't come with me, then I don't think this is going to work out.
I hope it works with you as it works with other PUAs. Anyway, learn to calibrate your game. Practice man, practice.
Sky