warning: this might be a little long

so many times ive tried going out sarging before
ive gone to malls with my friends who are somewhat into pua with the mindset of sarging
but my AA always got to me

today i was determined not to let that happen again

went to the mall, was supposed to meet up with another pua but he didnt show, its cool tho i had 2 friends with me so i had people to talk to

my prime goal for the day was to get over AA and open a set

first set
in barnes and nobel, i was checking out some music books because im a guitarist, and right behind me is the section for weddings and chick crap like that. out of the corner of my eye i see what looks like a cute little brunet(sp?) so i turn around and open

"lemme get your opinion, i have a friend, shes like a sister to me, her birthday is saturday i want to get her this shirt i saw at Gap but i cant find her size, small. i can only find XS and medium. would it be worse if i got her something too big or too small"

two things
1) when she turned around, her eyes were really bloodshot, her face wasnt that great and she wasnt as cute as i hoped
2) my body language was bad, i realized it after i left, i was leaning in, and i had my arm extened out holding on to a bookshelf, so i was kinda trapping her in

she gave her response, i left because i didnt know what else to say

second set
went into lucky because i had a gift card, the cashier was cute, and we had a few smart ass comments going back and forth, so i did the same opener to her, same outcome as last one

last set
in the foodcourt, i spot a twoset, one is an hb 8
walk over, do the who lies more opener
i was getting some good feedback at first, i eject, but then i come back with, out of curiosity how do you guys know eachother
they were cousins, i say yea i could kidna see it in the eyes

silence

more silence

uhh, well thanks i gotta get back to my friends

out of all three heres what i noticed i did wrong
1) no time constraint
2) poor body language, shouldnt have been so needy looking, more rocking on the back of my foot
3) need to pay attention more, but i think since it was my first time, thats something i need to build instead of learn
4) learn how to build comfort and attraction and what to do after opener

on the ride back my friends and i passed by a bar by wrigley field in chicago, we're at a red light, i look into a bar that has its windows open, see a hb8 blonde in a red dress
we make eye contact
i smiled and waved,
she smiles, really big, her friends ask who shes smiling at, she points to me
light turns green and my friends and i drive off
had i been 21, i would have so gone in to the bar, but im only 18

my frist sarge, sorry if its so long
but any feedback would be appriciated

hey man, at least you approached
as long as you can break through the AA you'll improve in no time. I've gone out sarging this past week but today is the only day AA really got the best of me... I'll have to give it my best!

Yeah man, you went out there and approached so respect for that! It's great that you analyze your own moves for mistakes, probably the best way to improve yourself. Keep it up!

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I like your effort dude. Keep it up.

Also- the "I can see it in the eyes" might come off a little too "Casanova", depending on if you had neg'd or not, you could've been like,"oh so that explains the lack of fashion sense" or something like that.

Maybe , when the opinion opener goes dead and you don't have any follow up, you might want to consider a different opener completely, because you need to be able to transition into more conversation.

Nice work man looking forward to hearing further about your progress!

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"I'm like a dog chasing a car; if I ever caught it I don't think I'd know what to do with it" - Heath Ledger as The Joker