Not sure if this is right area

After remembering something from Neil Strauss - The Game, i put together this while talking to a girl on msn;

We were just discussing how our last relationships had ended, she said that her ex was only after sex, to which i replied -

!_lachlan says:
whats the point, the guy who owns playboy mansion is in his late 70s still pumping Viagra and having sex, he wont ever have enough where will it end.
but people who have the love of their life, they are fulfilled, they can stop looking for more

I was wondering if someone has already used something like this before or if it can be changed to have more of an impact ..