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I might read through it later, but for now, cut down on the "fuck" & "fucking", repels anyone who is used to decent language. I stopped after a few paragraphs because it annoyed me so much.
I speak my mind, take it or leave it, im not here to attend your literal needs, only to help. enjoy the read my friend
So I've read through it now... You do make some really great points, but I still had to force myself to read through it. Not because of the content (which was, I'll say it again, amazing), but because you 1. kept swearing and 2. kept offending your reader. I shouldn't judge your text based on these two points, but I just wanted to let you know that this is something you can improve.