Hey all, im pretty new to this whole PUA thing. Ive read a LOT of DeAngelos material, as i found natural game to make the most sense to me.

Recently opened a set on Facebook with HB8, she was asking on her status for somebody to "cheer her up" i was bored and so, decided to try it on. Anyway:

Me
cheering up eh?
somthing terrible must have happened ;p

HB8
urggghhhhhhh
nothing
im just working too much and running myself into the ground and my boyfriends at reading (a local festival)

Me
ohh i see
not getting enough?
anyway, why on earth you working in the holidays?

HB8
so i can maintain my lifestyle of shopping

Me
i know the feeling, ha
still saving up for a car! gonna be working for a while i think..
do you drive?

HB8
no well failed it 1st time
then had to wait 6 weeks for the next
but its less than 3 now

Me
you failed? blimey.
well, i better dash. Good luck with your retake
xx

HB8
cya soon! xxx

Any views on this attempt, or even my attitude in general would be apprieated, i need a lot of work to say the least, haha

This might come across as a bit blunt but don't take it the wrong way!

Personally in natural game that's exactly what it is - you being yourself - there's just a few things about women that it always helps to know.

Anyway - first things first - her status to me is like a cry for attention - something which she's looking to be rewarded for by a "nice guy". I personally would've completely ignored it or come in with a neg (I neg a lot) along the lines of - "jeez are u always so miserable?! haha " Note the "haha " that shows it's being playful and she will still pour all her shit on you but it makes u look better.

If she does start pouring shit she's then in control of the frame - so get it back asap - u know something like - "oh that sucks - anyway this crazy thing happened to me today..."

That's the main advice I can give - personally if it was me having that convo with the girl I'd be finding it boring - interview questions, no flirting, constant agreement etc... It's not my personal style!!

But thats my 2 cents - keep the effort up though

Yeah, i did TRY to neg, with the "Something terrible must have happened " Kinda pathetic though.

She genuinely was in a bad mood, i couldn't have expected anything less.