Ok, I have been working on my text game, and A LOT on my inner game. I get one-itis really bad. So i have been trying to get over that. Any way thoughts on this, and ways to improve this thought. This girl and I have been talking back and forth (I have one-itis with this one pretty bad). but she left me hanging so I froze her until she texted me and she apologized saying that she had no service that night. Kept it really short and told her that I had a big day the next day and had to go to sleep. Then froze her for a day and a half. this was the Text convo with time line.
Me: Hey work has been crazy the last couple of days, but I thought of you and was wondering how things were going?
Her: (2 min later) They're good

leaving for texas tomorrow and going shopping with my friend ... tonight. how are things with you aside from work?
Me: (10 min later) they are good. Just trying to stay sane with how crazy work has been. I have been catching some after christmas sales as well. Didn't have my fashion guide with me though. Are you ready for Texas?
Her:(4 min later) Who is your fashion guide? I'm ready as I'll ever be lol. I'm going to have a pretty tough convo with some ladies in my family.
Me: (10 min later) Since things with the last girl I dated did not work out I don't have a fashion guide. would you like and application? What are you haveing to call the ladies out for?
No response after that. I like correction on how to handle these things...I know I need help with my game. But I am trying. Good news is that I am not panicked like I used to be. But I feel like I should have left the part about the last girl I dated off. Just said. something along the lines of " I just have not hired one yet. Would you like an application?"
Any imput is great. Thanks