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PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 3:22 pm 
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[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lo8tC5D3diE[/youtube]

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 3:22 pm 
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please do let me know what you think about the video people....


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 11:15 pm 
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I just watched it. Not bad. The one thing is I think its too loooooong. There was some stuff you coulda edited out. Probably shouldnt be longer than 5 mins. I know you hate to get rid of stuff, but nearly 10 minutes, thats a long time man.

I thought there were some funny parts tho, like the music was pretty good too. The 'beat it' scene I liked, But instead of slo-mo right there, you could have done fast-mo. If you took more advantage of speeding up parts, you have a better chance of not losing people. Plus if its short and sweet, people will be more inclined to watch it two and three times.

Also, the ending needs something more... cant just lose the tie. maybe box up all your props you used to be different and throw it out, i dono.

Damn tho, I will say I love those middle-eastern girls! Gorgeous.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:08 pm 
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There was some pretty cool camera effects in there, but i agree with swoop that it could be a bit shorter.


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 8:49 pm 
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Nice video.

Then, its all about be yourself. I prefer "betterself", but still a good message.

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