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| Author: | Josh12345 [ Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Critique my game so far example inside |
So this is what I have come up with so far *This is an example from a live 1 set, my friend introduced me to this girl. Me: Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy (big smile on my face. I have a hard time not smiling.....all the time) She: Hi *Handshake* Me: Thats a cool hair style..*pause*..if you're living in the 50s. She: laughs and jokes along with it. Me: I got to get back to my friends. Me: So what did you want to be when you were 7? (Mehows material) Her: A doctor Me: A doctor at age 7? that is a ridiculos ambition for a 7 year old...most girls i talk to want to be a princess at age 7 Me: Do you know what I wanted to be at age 7? Her: What? Me: A boxer. ( I couldnt think of anything LOL) I use this to throw very playful punches (I'd say more like shoulder taps) at her in a joking way From this point on i just vibe, while trying to drop hints of value all while trying to kino escalate. Am i missing any key parts? I don't seem to have any real attraction phase here except for the initial love/hate neg. Is there anything I should be doing before I jump into the first question to demonstrate more value? I feel like I jumped right into comfort by asking that question instead of building attraction. I am going to a social for one of my friends companies this friday so I want to be really prepared. Last year at this same event one of my buddies got a bj behind the building in the parking lot. I want to do the same this friday LOL. -Josh |
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| Author: | Budwood [ Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:39 am ] |
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not bad nice and playful, a good start |
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| Author: | Backfire [ Wed Aug 20, 2008 12:55 pm ] |
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I don't think you are using really good A1 material there. I would use that more in A3/C1. A1 material works best if it has to do with the surroundings, the situation or something that she can find relevant to the moment. There also wasn't really much of a stack there, if I read rightly, you kinda just smashed that question out there. I don't know about "heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy" as an opener. Kinda sounds like you're trying to pick her up. Although the hairstyle bit could be used I guess. As long as it isn't preceded by too many 'y's. |
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| Author: | Josh12345 [ Thu Aug 21, 2008 10:17 am ] |
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true. you have a point. i felt like i was missing a lot of the early phases of attraction. The "Heyyyyyy" was more of a friendly enthusastic "Hey!". but i can see why it make look stupid to be over enthusiastic. Can i get some suggestions of some good a1 material? Can you give me an example of how to include the surroundings better. |
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