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| Author: | stevo [ Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | Critique my myspace sarge |
so tell me where i need to improve and some general advice. (read from bottom to top) from: stevo haha yeeea, im getting judged alot these days ------------------------------------------------------------- from: hb9 hahahha at least your half naked so i wouldnt judge you thaaaaat much (inside joke, basically you only get judged when ur naked ) ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:49 PM Wow, Thats exactly what a stalker would say to make myself feel "Safe". They are like..I am not the stalking type. Then next thing I know your in my bushes watching me walk to the mailbox to get my mail in my boxers. Just to let you know I am on to brandi! ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:47 PM haha that wont happen dont worry ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:43 PM yea i no but the last thing i need is another stalker ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:42 PM oh ya your the funnniest for sureeeee ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:37 PM their both pretty different rogers chill. mike is funny... but im funnier right?? ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:23 PM aw really well ya he is pretty hot but idk i kinda like roger to ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:17 PM yea its mike, he's kinda obsessed with u. Do u like him? ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 4:04 PM ummm steve really random haha frank no. um bob probly not. so i guess its roger or mike. um im gunna guess mike? ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From:stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 3:56 PM haha k.. steve bob frank roger mike (random names) ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:06 PM haha true. idk how bout you name five people and i guess who it iss??? ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:02 PM srry its not as funnn. ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:01 PM ummmm just tellllll me hahha ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 1:00 PM yeaaa ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 12:56 PM guesses of who i think it is? ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 8, 2008 12:23 PM k u have 5 guesses and ill tell u if ur rite ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: hb9 Date: Jun 8, 2008 11:35 AM haha yess whoo? ----------------- Original Message ----------------- From: stevo Date: Jun 7, 2008 11:10 PM hey i no someone who likes u.. want a hint? |
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| Author: | SLeven [ Mon Jun 09, 2008 12:49 am ] |
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I think that it was really good towards the end where you called her a stalker. however, i didnt really like how you started to talk about other guys becuase then it seemed kinda like you were giving her ideas and it seemed kinda weird how she just went out and was like "that guys hot." But that might have been stuck in there to make you jealous. overall i think you did a good job. |
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