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Author:  philros1 [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:21 am ]
Post subject:  critique my online sarge please
Messaged a random on myspace and this is how it went (starts at the bottom of the page):

SHE HASN'T RESPONDED TO MY LAST MESSAGE AND SHE ACTUALLY DENIED MY FRIEND REQUEST I BELIEVE

CRITIQUE

No way!..HOT Pink and Hello Kitty, we already have so much in common, that definitely calls for a friend request! hahaha

Judging from your default pic you have nice eyes, well your left one at least! hahah

P.S. Any tips for stopping a stalker ex-gf from lurking your myspace?? GRRRRR!!!


----------------- Original Message -----------------
From: ..ღ♥LILY PROM QUEEN 08♥ღ ..
Date: Jun 5, 2008 4:11 PM



so 600 million ppl are on Myspace and I dont even know u! and your not even on my friends list!

----------------- Original Message -----------------
From: ..King Philip / Papa Smurf..
Date: Jun 5, 2008 2:52 PM



Well I've been on this myspace thing for awhile and you still haven't said "hello". How rude! lol
----------------- Original Message -----------------
From: ..ღ♥LILY PROM QUEEN 08♥ღ ..
Date: Jun 5, 2008 1:44 PM



what do u mean?

----------------- Original Message -----------------
From: ..King Philip / Papa Smurf..
Date: Jun 5, 2008 1:42 PM


Are you shy or something...
Author:  thatkidej [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:51 am ]
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Not a bad line, but you could do better.

Start with a neg, and don't request her, she should request you. You're the prize, remember?

Say you saw her checking you out in a store or something haha, that's my favorite.
Author:  c_n12 [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:00 am ]
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You've got a good idea; online pick-up is a great way to meet women however that is one of the worst openers to use on MySpace. Don't worry I did far stupider things and almoast got myself arrested for sexual harrassment back in the day but you're going to make mistakes.

You're just coming of as a weirdo to her and being WAY to try-hard on the techniques. It looks like you're messing up with one line and just trying to pull another one out of your ass hoping it works. You're throwing negs around aimlessly and trying to do everything but be yourself and meet her.

"HOT Pink and Hello Kitty, we already have so much in common, that definitely calls for a friend request!" --> Needy and insecure; she knows she has you at this point and knows she has beta'd you.

As far as stoping your ex do one of two things:

1) Try talking to her

2) Go to Settings --> Privacy ---> Block Users ---> View list

You seem to be trying to do everything but be yourself. Online is the one place I condone indirect game but what ever happened to a good old fashion opinion opener? ;)

- Chris 8)
Author:  joker_jack84 [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:15 am ]
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Dude no. I have sarged on facebook enough to tell that opener and in fact the whole thing isn't working. Too needy, make yourself the prize, and hot pink and hello kitty as a common bond? You kidding me man? Not to be an ass but if an hb is wearing my favorite color its not enough to convince me to say hi, let alone add them on facebook/myspace. Now if you two shared a favorite movie that is some thing to work with cuz then you can quote a line and perhaps even share a lol. But anyway good try and keep at it. You don't get pro over night, but you sure as hell can try. :wink:
Author:  joker_jack84 [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:17 am ]
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Also remember a PUA does not hit on a girl right away. He waits, thats what separates AFC's from PUA's. Well that and actual talent, not dumb luck.
Author:  SnowBlow [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:46 am ]
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Quote:
No way!..HOT Pink and Hello Kitty, we already have so much in common, that definitely calls for a friend request! hahaha

Judging from your default pic you have nice eyes, well your left one at least! hahah

P.S. Any tips for stopping a stalker ex-gf from lurking your myspace?? GRRRRR!!!

Waayy to much for an opener.

she doesnt even know you and your asking about ex's and her advice ect ect.

Its comming off as your too eager for the friend request. Your neg was lame.
Author:  philros1 [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 3:45 am ]
Post subject:  SOOO
So What should I have said?!?!?
Author:  thatkidej [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:23 am ]
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Say "I FOUND YOU! You're the girl that was checking me out in Starbucks yesterday! Naughty.... haha"

That's my favorite, got me the most results. I'm experimenting with it.
Author:  SnowBlow [ Fri Jun 06, 2008 5:42 pm ]
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"Hey Im xxx I hope you dont take this the wrong way but.. You Know For a Minute You Reminded me of My Little Sister...Shes Obessed with hello kitty..arent you a little old for that (wink face). I See Your In Love With Fashion..Who Is Your Favourite Designer?"

I found her myspace
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu ... =122831170

I think anyway..this is not a HB12 try HB5.5-HB6 (that thinks she's a HB10..I wouldnt bother with her)
Author:  joker_jack84 [ Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:21 pm ]
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Why does every one insist on going above a 10. HB12? How does that work, unless your scale is 1-15 or 1-20. I just don't get it.
Author:  Second Chance [ Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:31 pm ]
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Why does every one insist on going above a 10. HB12? How does that work, unless your scale is 1-15 or 1-20. I just don't get it.
It is like in The Game when there is mention of girls recieving HB11 ratings, because they are that much hotter than ones who had recieved HB10.

- SC
Author:  thatkidej [ Sun Jun 08, 2008 5:52 am ]
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Quote:
Quote:
Why does every one insist on going above a 10. HB12? How does that work, unless your scale is 1-15 or 1-20. I just don't get it.
It is like in The Game when there is mention of girls recieving HB11 ratings, because they are that much hotter than ones who had recieved HB10.

- SC
HB11s are already off the charts, there's no reason to go above 11. HB11 is basically saying a girl is hotter than a ten out of ten. Why go up another one? We're starting to redefine the scale here.
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