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Author:  WhereisWaldo [ Mon Mar 25, 2013 8:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Please rate and criticize my Text

Hello yall, im not necessarily new here I have another account I forgot the username tho..


I met this girl a couple of weeks ago she lives a couple hours away
she is a good HB7 or 7.5 but she is cool so yea..

Me:I know you haven't forgot about me yet.
her: Of course not, did u ever add me on FB
me:No I didn't look me up.... (she has my name, I cnat find her)
her: I cant I use my phone it doesn't let me
me:ill try later, what trouble have u been getting into lately?
her not too much going get my tattoo fixed later
me:thats cool what is it...
her: a bow on my hip
me:I want a tat on rib cage, so my name gonna be on top of your bow
her: Ha silly ud have put mine on ur ribs
me: u would love that... new deal my name on ur hip,ur lips tated on me...
her: how would that even work crazy lol!
me:diff spot like my chest..how u fixing ur bow...
her im puttin pink in it so it stand out more..
me: I love being in pink
her: oh yah lol thtas good
me:lol send before an after pics of ur that I would love to see it ( she has sent a pic in the past)
her: Okay I will
me: dont forget gotta jet ttyl
her: I wont text u tomorrow...

end of convo

my main objective in this interaction
was to see if she was still attracted and do some light flirting..
I am just trying to keep in contact and the attraction on a nice level
til we meet again

I would say I did well but I could use more work...


Your thoughts please and thank you...

Author:  AcesHigh [ Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:22 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

Not bad, the end to me was a low note however. You should stop texting a girl when she is most interested in whatever you are saying. Also the tat thread went on for a bit. The climax of the interaction seemed to be when you said "u would love that. new deal my name on ur hip, ur lips tated on me..." The convo sputtered after that because you started qualifying what you said(diff spot etc...), then you were a bit needy(send pics, dont forget to text). I would not re-open this thread unless she text's you a pic of the tat. Pics or it didn't happen lol.

Author:  VietnameseProdigy [ Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

this was awful... you didn't do anything besides ramble about tattoos

why aren't you setting up a meetup?

Author:  WhereisWaldo [ Tue Mar 26, 2013 8:36 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

Quote:
this was awful... you didn't do anything besides ramble about tattoos

why aren't you setting up a meetup?
She lives like 4 hours away..

How would u suggest I do better..

I can post more text messages if need be

Author:  WhereisWaldo [ Tue Mar 26, 2013 8:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

Quote:
Not bad, the end to me was a low note however. You should stop texting a girl when she is most interested in whatever you are saying. Also the tat thread went on for a bit. The climax of the interaction seemed to be when you said "u would love that. new deal my name on ur hip, ur lips tated on me..." The convo sputtered after that because you started qualifying what you said(diff spot etc...), then you were a bit needy(send pics, dont forget to text). I would not re-open this thread unless she text's you a pic of the tat. Pics or it didn't happen lol.
I got the pics
gimmie a second..

Author:  AcesHigh [ Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

You don't have to post the pic's, I was just throwing that out as something to say.

Author:  Reality Show [ Thu Mar 28, 2013 6:49 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

Would Jason Bourne write that text?

No.

Less texting my friend. More throwing kick ass parties. Let them hunt you down. They are not looking for someone to talk to. They want a man.

Author:  WhereisWaldo [ Fri Mar 29, 2013 9:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Please rate and criticize my Text

Quote:
Would Jason Bourne write that text?

No.

Less texting my friend. More throwing kick ass parties. Let them hunt you down. They are not looking for someone to talk to. They want a man.
Jason Bourne is a fictional character.

These text messages are over a span of a day...

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