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Author:  TenGame [ Mon May 13, 2013 2:37 am ]
Post subject:  New DHV Story I just wrote- Let me know your thoughts
Have you guys ever been to LeBain? Oh wow, it's amazing. Some of my friends came to visit me from out of town this weekend and last night, I took them there.

Anyway, we’re having this amazing night and we head down to the main floor and go over towards the hottub and I immediately I decide to just take off all my clothes and jump in and my friend is laughing hysterically and she jumps in right after and everyone is staring because NOBODY else is in the hot-tub yet and we’re doing cannon balls into the water and splashing around.

The water was so warm and I could see the DJ enjoying himself, playing amazing music that just made me feel like I was in a good friend's backyard, completely relaxed, enjoying myself like I was twelve years old. And as we’re doing this, I can see everyone around just start staring into the hot-tub and I’m sitting there like, “Look I know we’re awesome but this is ridiculous” and then out of the corner of my eye I see what everyone is staring at- Two girls had stripped completely naked and were just absolutely GOING AT EACH OTHER about 5 feet from where I’m sitting in the hot-tub.

I look over and out of an odd morbid curiosity, I just couldn't look away. These girls were completely naked, making out, grinding on each other and having a total blast... Don’t get me wrong- it was incredibly attractive but I’m having to juggle that with the thought of, “what the fuck did I just get my friends into”.

Nevertheless, today when I dropped them off at the airport they all just couldn't stop talking about how amazing the trip was and how they weren't going to ever forget the time they saw two naked women, in a hot-tub, in the middle of a club in New York… At the end of the day, I couldn't help but feel a slight sense of pride at having been able to show them such a…. unique time.
Author:  TenGame [ Mon May 13, 2013 3:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: New DHV Story I just wrote- Let me know your thoughts
So I went out last night and field-tested this story. What I found was that it's a great story and girls def. get attracted but it's too long.

With the way I deliver it, the routine takes about 5 minutes for me to complete- I need to shorten it so I can tell this story and cut to something else.

Part of the issue with this is that, as I'm building attraction, she doesn't know I'm interested in her yet, so it's really easy for disruptions to come and pull her away or for her to leave. Becuase in this first part of the interaction, she's not investing at all, I'm just demonstrating value and as a result, it's still really easy for her to walk away..

That's part of the reason I need to shorten this, I need to convey the value quicker, so that I can get her to invest quicker so that it's less likely she'll leave.

I had a couple HB's who were listening to the story and touching me a lot while I was telling it and laughing- plenty of IOI's- meaning they were attracted... but because all I had done was build attraction and they hadn't invested at all and they didn't even know I was actually hitting on them, when one of their friends came, it was really easy for them to just be like, "Okay, I'm going to head to our bottle table with my friend"
Author:  TenGame [ Mon May 13, 2013 7:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: New DHV Story I just wrote- Let me know your thoughts
Shortened it and just practiced it 3 times to see what the timing is like and I averaged it at about 2 minutes and 15 seconds - I think that's pretty solid... maybe a little too long still but I'll field test it and see if I can cut it down a bit.

I'm also going to come up with 3 other stories and write them down- I have a couple that I already use a lot so I'll just get those written down and go from there.

Have you guys ever been to LeBain? Some of my friends came to visit me from out of town this weekend and last night, I took them there.

Anyway, we’re having this amazing night and we head down to the main floor and go over towards the hottub and I immediately I decide to just take off all my clothes and jump in and my friend is laughing hysterically and she jumps in right after and we’re doing cannon balls into the water and splashing around.

And as we’re doing this, I can see everyone around just start staring and I’m sitting there like, “Look I know we’re awesome but this is ridiculous” and then out of the corner of my eye I see what everyone is staring at- Two girls had stripped completely naked and were absolutely GOING AT EACH OTHER about 5 feet from where we’re sitting in the hot-tub.

Out of morbid curiosity, I just couldn't look away. These girls were completely naked, making out, grinding on each other and having a total blast... Don’t get me wrong- as a man, I found it very attractive but I’m having to juggle that with the thought of, “what the fuck did I just get my friends into”.
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