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| Author: | chikin pickle [ Thu Dec 09, 2010 6:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Text game critique |
I've been talking to this chick Anna from my work for the last week and a half. Definitely smoking hot, definitely hottest chick I have gamed so far in my short time since growing the balls and making the observations to have game. Not to mention she is quite good at the frame game, which I enjoy very much. Anyways, here is a text conversation from yesterday. Her: Hehe homework's Boring. Me: Haha that sucks what do you want me to do about it? Her: Save me of course Me: Ha, like you saved me at work last night? (I had texted her last night at work, bored) Her:You never asked to be saved Me: Haha, geez do I gotta spell it out for you? Her: Hahahaha XD Besides, isn't it the damsel in distress that's saved? Me: Haha you're assuming there's a hero in my book Her: Unless you're assuming we're switching roles Me: Hahaha nah, more like the presence of a hero depends on the damsel :p Her: I suppose, then there'd be no saving her, cough cough, or him Me: Haha, well the book isn't finished yet. I might be able to edit a few pages. Her: haha, do I get a copy? Me: Maybe if you play your cards right with the publisher Her: Is it anyone I've heard of? Me:I believe you might know the name. Her: Haha, okay:) so what's the book about? Me: Hmmm, something about a boy and a girl Her: Isn't it always? Me:Haha many times yes. Her: Hmmm do I get a hint. Me: Haha, where's the fun in spoiling the ending? Her: Hehe then tell me about the beginning. (here is where I crash and burn in the most glorious way possible) Me: Youre awfully impatient. and it's pretty much downhill and I cut the convo. So, aside from my over neg faceplant. what do you guys think? |
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| Author: | Vietman100 [ Thu Dec 09, 2010 6:45 am ] |
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Sounds good. You kept her interested and played with her for a bit. I think you made the right decision to cut the convo after the last text you sent. If it were me, I would have used her text as way to get her to hang out with you. Something like, "Let's go out for ice cream/coffee tonight and I'll tell you." Other than that... Keep the flirty texts going man. |
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| Author: | Roz [ Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:28 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Text game critique |
Quote:
Her: Hehe homework's Boring.
Hahaha... you really like to, eh?Me: Haha that sucks what do you want me to do about it? Her: Save me of course Me: Ha, like you saved me at work last night? (I had texted her last night at work, bored) Her:You never asked to be saved Me: Haha, geez do I gotta spell it out for you? Her: Hahahaha XD Besides, isn't it the damsel in distress that's saved? Me: Haha you're assuming there's a hero in my book Her: Unless you're assuming we're switching roles Me: Hahaha nah, more like the presence of a hero depends on the damsel :p Her: I suppose, then there'd be no saving her, cough cough, or him Me: Haha, well the book isn't finished yet. I might be able to edit a few pages. Her: haha, do I get a copy? Me: Maybe if you play your cards right with the publisher Her: Is it anyone I've heard of? Me:I believe you might know the name. Her: Haha, okay:) so what's the book about? Me: Hmmm, something about a boy and a girl Her: Isn't it always? Me:Haha many times yes. Her: Hmmm do I get a hint. Me: Haha, where's the fun in spoiling the ending? Her: Hehe then tell me about the beginning. (here is where I crash and burn in the most glorious way possible) Me: Youre awfully impatient. Quote: and it's pretty much downhill and I cut the convo.
I think it would be of more benefit to post the part of the convo that went downhill; that's where you could use the advice... it's obvious you know you did a relatively good job, because you say you noticed a turning point; so I'm not sure if you're looking for an "atta boy!" here, or what?So, aside from my over neg faceplant. what do you guys think? Again, it would help to see the rest of the convo, but from what I've read, I don't think the You're awfully impatient neg used was a bad idea at all. -Roz |
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| Author: | chikin pickle [ Fri Dec 10, 2010 12:21 am ] |
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Well, it's more like this is most definitely among one of the hottest babes I've gamed so far in the short period of time since I came to the realization that women are just people and I can talk to them if I want to. Just trying to make sure my game is tight, see if there is anything I can improve on. |
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| Author: | THaywood [ Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:57 am ] |
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the point is, we cant critque you on what you've posted.... it was all good at that point, what we need is the part of the convo where you feel it went bad. as its from your mistakes that you can learn, and hopefully we can point out what those mistakes were.....so why did it go bad? |
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| Author: | Ryan Black SashaPUA [ Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:24 pm ] |
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That many texts over ONE DAY? Don't you have better shit to do? You wanna fuck her or write an essay together? Jesus christ. My entire text exchange over the period of like a MONTH with a girl is shorter than that. WHAT ARE YOU DOING? When things are going well and you have her interest, just invite her out to do something. You're busy, you got shit to do. Don't hang on her every word. She obviously likes you anyway. You can now assume she wants to fuck you next time you see her, and just go from there. That means ESCALATE. Don't be a pussy. |
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| Author: | farismagic [ Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:33 pm ] |
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I agree with blondeguy too many texts... with my GF i start answering with YES or NO after the 3rd or 4th text. however that was a good text game you weren't giving straight up answers but at the end when she asked you twice i think she really wanted to know, so maybe should gave her a hit. But ye ask her out and fuck her |
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| Author: | chikin pickle [ Fri Dec 10, 2010 8:16 pm ] |
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Quote: That many texts over ONE DAY? Don't you have better shit to do? You wanna fuck her or write an essay together? Jesus christ. My entire text exchange over the period of like a MONTH with a girl is shorter than that. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
gracias bro, that's what I was looking for.
When things are going well and you have her interest, just invite her out to do something. You're busy, you got shit to do. Don't hang on her every word. She obviously likes you anyway. You can now assume she wants to fuck you next time you see her, and just go from there. That means ESCALATE. Don't be a pussy. |
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