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There was a moment that felt like the kiss time, but it's a club I go to a lot, should I be closing here regardless or perhaps move to a quieter area?
I don't see what going to that club a lot has to do with anything. Aside from that, it's a kiss, what's the point of a quieter area? You should've gone for it.
Anyway, you did well otherwise, it seems. Here's a couple of things you need to understand though. Getting numbers in clubs is generally a waste of time. If something happens, it needs to happen that night.
This is not necessarily applicable in this case however, because you spent a lot of time together and built a connection. But that's not how it typically goes. So keep that in mind for future reference.
Secondly, your texting sucks. Read the guide in my signature if you want details as to why that is, I'm sure you'll understand why afterwards.
But to answer your last question, getting cute and keeping it simple are not mutually exclusive. You can do both. Your issue here wasn't a matter of simple texting, but of boring texting.