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Author:  deputyvanhalen [ Sun Aug 17, 2014 9:44 am ]
Post subject:  The Evolution Of A Text Message
Just putting this out there for any feedback + suggestions.... Number closed a cute HB8 Girl the other night. I began texting her in a true AFC Fashion. This was honestly how I was feeling at the time as although I got this girls number I wasn't really 100 percent sure I'd made a good enough impression....something along the lines of

"Hey Jess, its Phil from Laverys on Friday =) How are you keeping? Listen, I really liked talking to you the other night -- thought you were funny, intelligent and rather cute. I remember saying you lived near me and was wondering if you fancied going out for a drink sometime? I think you said you were going on holiday soon so told me to get in touch with you. However, if you aren't interested for whatever reason, thats OK, I won't take it personally. Phil"

Looked back at this and realized "WTF?" thats AFC as f*ck.... so decided to readjust it to be more cocky + confident....

"Hey Jess, its Phil from Laverys on Friday =) How are you keeping? Here, I found your banter surprisingly enjoyable the other night -- You conveyed a good sense of humour, intelligence & you were VERY sexy -- even if you are from fermanagh ;) I remember saying you lived near me and was wondering when you fancied hanging out?... Before you fell drunkingly on your backside infront of me as you were leaving (classy lady-like exit btw...you totally didn't embarrass yourself. At all. No really) You managed to string together a coherent sentence about getting in touch with you before you went away or something. Lemme know. x"


Might be too cocky now, but I am going with it anyway LOL
Author:  santiagof1 [ Mon Aug 18, 2014 3:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: The Evolution Of A Text Message
The second one was pretty good man good approach!
Author:  rambonot [ Tue Aug 26, 2014 4:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Evolution Of A Text Message
Quote:
Just putting this out there for any feedback + suggestions.... Number closed a cute HB8 Girl the other night. I began texting her in a true AFC Fashion. This was honestly how I was feeling at the time as although I got this girls number I wasn't really 100 percent sure I'd made a good enough impression....something along the lines of

"Hey Jess, its Phil from Laverys on Friday =) How are you keeping? Listen, I really liked talking to you the other night -- thought you were funny, intelligent and rather cute. I remember saying you lived near me and was wondering if you fancied going out for a drink sometime? I think you said you were going on holiday soon so told me to get in touch with you. However, if you aren't interested for whatever reason, thats OK, I won't take it personally. Phil"

Looked back at this and realized "WTF?" thats AFC as f*ck.... so decided to readjust it to be more cocky + confident....

"Hey Jess, its Phil from Laverys on Friday =) How are you keeping? Here, I found your banter surprisingly enjoyable the other night -- You conveyed a good sense of humour, intelligence & you were VERY sexy -- even if you are from fermanagh ;) I remember saying you lived near me and was wondering when you fancied hanging out?... Before you fell drunkingly on your backside infront of me as you were leaving (classy lady-like exit btw...you totally didn't embarrass yourself. At all. No really) You managed to string together a coherent sentence about getting in touch with you before you went away or something. Lemme know. x"


Might be too cocky now, but I am going with it anyway LOL
dude...the second one also seemed pretty AFC. There were hints of needy and 'trying too hard'. Did you spend a lot of time writing it...cos it was quite evident. Anyway...all doesn't matter if she responded and you set up a date. Did it work?
Author:  CharlesFinley [ Tue Aug 26, 2014 4:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Evolution Of A Text Message
Your message needs to be shorter... Not a novel... More to the point. It's really not all that funny, currently, either - but I think that's what you're trying for.

Do you have an issue calling her on the phone instead? Might be better... If you'd rather text, try something like:

"Hey you, it's Phil from Friday night! Wanted to see how you were after that awesome night - we drank SO much! I had a great time though (from what I remember), particularly after the clown and the midget arrived! Anyway, I'm thinking of grabbing a drink tomorrow after work at X place, and I suppose I wouldn't completely object to seeing your face again... Care to join?"
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